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holy shit is Cronos his dad??
sharingan for the win
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good stuff, just know i dont think thw character os eeally explored yet. kudos
sounds awesome, but the problem is we really dlnt know him yet. He has planned a lot, hasnt really lived at all.
light is boring, and this universe lacks "holy" or "white magic", as it instead focuses on normal magic, and magoc that has consequences or sacrifices from the user AKA dark magic.
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Naruto, is that you?
You do realize he is technically a god according to common literature right?, like Kaguya and her skill in other dimensions, maybe more as he progresses. Also infinite sage mode with no need for balance as it is their nature, so no risk of transforming as theyd become themselves, and already are. Like stone cant become stone as it IS stone.
Hey man I like your story a lot, and I understand the sidelining of romance, but please dont turn the MC into a betrayer or someone who abandons friends. Even if selfishly done, improving and mantaining relationships always helps, both mentally, polotically, and as investments for other things.
Good shit, as I never read the original series I enjoy yours a lot. After looking it up I think I will prefer it as its way too convuluted and some of it just isnt appealing to me.