SeniorTaco

holy shit is Cronos his dad??

awesome

sharingan for the win

lol sry but lol. sheep do what sheep do

lol

good stuff, just know i dont think thw character os eeally explored yet. kudos

sounds awesome, but the problem is we really dlnt know him yet. He has planned a lot, hasnt really lived at all.

Merry Christmas

Awesomw stuff. Wont say its award winning or doesnt need revision, but the creativity, ideas and solid writing of the story are a VERY good fandiction to read.

light is boring, and this universe lacks "holy" or "white magic", as it instead focuses on normal magic, and magoc that has consequences or sacrifices from the user AKA dark magic.