UnhinderedWanderer

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I wander the hells,the heavens and the earth I have no path....If u are life I give you death, if you are death I give you life.. My path is unknown evil or good I do not know I am chaos omnipotent...

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UnhinderedWanderer2 months ago
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His sense of smell should also be heightened and used to identify things as well.
As the three men entered the blacksmith shop, Yan Jin's acute senses allowed him to recognize them instantly, despite his blindness. The distinctive cadence of their voices, the weight of their footsteps—all served as familiar markers in the mix of sound that filled the forge.
Legend of the Divine Archer
Fantasy · Judejayden
UnhinderedWanderer2 months ago
Replied to Kidney_Kidney
Ikr….
Even in his former life, that kind of place harbored believers; all the more in this chaotic world rife with demons and monsters. As long as it wasn't the like of the Shuiyun Township River God, who was transformed from a demon, he couldn't be bothered to intervene.
Attaining Immortality, Starting From Slaying Demons
Eastern · June 19
UnhinderedWanderer2 months ago
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Notice the wording “THIS” never says actual skill name or anything just that specific skill is B tier so it may be word play
"This Skill lets me shape a part of my body into something I've seen before. It's a B-Tier Skill," Rey explained, his matter-of-fact tone matching the unassuming nature of an average boy.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
UnhinderedWanderer3 months ago
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Eyes*
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Seventy Seventh Seven
Fantasy · ciae_re
UnhinderedWanderer3 months ago
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Was getting immersed then damn cringy dialogue took me out 💀
"Die, idiot! This daddy needs your body to rent a nice apartment for his mother," Klaus muttered, his tone calm but focused. He lunged forward, leaping high into the air. His sword glowed again, but this time, instead of using Moon Slash, he aimed directly at the beast. With a powerful thrust, he drove his sword deep into the monster's neck.
The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Pen_Drop
UnhinderedWanderer3 months ago
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All this unecesary dialogue during is so cringe worthy and immersion breaking 😭
"Now!" Klaus shouted, slashing his sword in a strange arc. A dense crescent of ice shot out, heading straight for the Shadowmane. But Klaus didn't stop there. He dashed forward, each step carefully calculated.
The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Pen_Drop
UnhinderedWanderer3 months ago
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Repeating the same shit 😭 basically all of chapter one should be deleted 😂
In the first decade, the planet underwent a period of adaptation. Although countless lives were lost, many managed to endure. The following ten years saw significant advancements in both power and politics. By the third decade, a new transformation began—one that would shape the future of the next generation.
The Last Paragon in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Pen_Drop
UnhinderedWanderer3 months ago
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Stop putting these here they are completely redundant and add nothing to the writing and infact take away from it.
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I CHOSE to be a VILLAIN, not a THIRD-RATE EXTRA!!
Fantasy · LittleEmber
UnhinderedWanderera year ago
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It’s gonna be fun watching her fall into debauchery!
"Very well," he said, "~Watch~ Me."
Debauchery of a Soul-Eating Wraith
Fantasy · NatePrince
UnhinderedWanderera year ago
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Please explain the personality thing because you didn’t cover what it actually did at all..
[Tightness C, Durability C, Warmth D, Responsiveness D] [Personality remains intact (100%)]
Ero Academy
Games · Manhwas