nevianz
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nevianz11mthReplied to ScientistxFair enough I respect that, however for the memes. That sounds like a skill issue
"…" The man looked at Jon and sighed as he fished out some candy from his pocket and gave it to Jon, "Just go away, infant."- nevianz1yrCommented
Knife ears and their age superiority complex. Sorry I’m not in the triple digits yet gramps.
"…" The man looked at Jon and sighed as he fished out some candy from his pocket and gave it to Jon, "Just go away, infant." - nevianz1yrCommented
Why did it take me so long to realize she was basically a children’s book heroine riding a unicorn in battle? Like Solus you freaking did it, you became something every young girl dreamed of at some point, and it was cool.
They had heard of the Golden Knight, but they had expected a Tiamat-like monster, not a petite young lady. Picturing her riding on top of a Raiju fighting against Divine Beasts dozens of times bigger than her was something that seemed out of a fairy tale. - nevianz1yrCommented
The Royals come out swinging. Time to mop up the trash that’s been sitting in the court.
"You can pick me as your champion as well, Supreme Magus Verhen." - nevianz1yrCommentedCh 13 A Small Fight
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I would like to see more world building with this story. It’s already on a unique track from the original story because we are following a group of characters from the very beginning. Instead of a lone swordsman that occasionally groups up with others. Let’s say the group preforms really well in the upcoming floor boss fight. Everyone that survives the fight will talk about this powerful party of players. Many people will want to befriend the party or join the party. This can lead into the party forming a guild or having connections with influential people later on. By forming a strong guild or having a reputation of being strong players, they can change the plot of the story. This is just something to consider while writing. How your character affect the world around them. I look forward to your future chapters.
Ch 13 Not A Chapter - nevianz1yrCommented
Now where have I heard this before?
Along with 500 warmongering troopers, Jon declared that he is marching on to Solstheim. - nevianz1yrCommented
Definitely not suspicious
"When I say grab, you grab and not let go." She said. - nevianz1yrCommented
Gotta love an all powerful being that respects their mama and the lesson they taught them.
"Is this why she came to the mountain the first time? To be fair, I did detect faint signs of magic coming from the Queens when I arrived. Hmm… Maybe that's why she teleported there the first time. Now that I destroyed the gate she won't be able to get the liquid mana anymore. But why didn't she try to enter? If she entered the Beyond, the gate would have been closed. Since the gate was still there, she didn't enter. Does she not know what the Beyond is? Shame." Shaking his head in pity, he threw the glass bottle into his storage. He figured that if he does find another gate, it should be fine to track her down again and offer her some liquid mana since he had almost killed her and took over 'mine' for liquid mana. Even if he was a level 950 being, his mother had never taught him to be a tyrant. - nevianz1yrCommented
Wait? Didn’t she have the weapon while in Winter’s grace? It was made with Aarim’s help.
"I haven't been able to make much progress with it since I don't have a weapon that fits my hidden proficiency." Lyrica replied. - nevianz1yrCommented
Being labeled as a tsundere is as bad as dealing with a masochist because no matter what you do you lose.
"Eat sh*t and die old man! What do you mean I'm one of those tsundere things!?" Shiro gritted her teeth since she felt like she was about to bust a vein talking to this old man. - nevianz1yrReplied to Reaper_X_7998
Everyone focused on the personality being a villain. The personality is based off of what your pretending to be “which you can do perfectly”. So you could act like someone who is extememly charasmatic and motivated or someone studious and wise. Find traits you like and create those personalities. 100% would have taken that talent. Worst come to worst mc has nanomancy, they can probably find a way to delete a personality or download it into a machine and create an AI or something.
"Not worth it." Shiro concluded. Recycling the book, Shiro scanned the books on the bookshelf. - nevianz1yrCommented
Omg, is he gonna turn Potema into envy? Please let that be the case im so excited.
The ritual seemed to be far from over and Jon had his own plan for it but first, he needed to get rid of the numbers. - nevianz1yrCommentedWe also found a shop selling Cactus Wine, and I bought almost the entire place, I've grown addicted to Cactus Juice… And making it wine made it even deadlier for me!
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Jumped the gun there, didnt even ask if he had a way to do this himself. Although im sure she just wanted an excuse to get it for herself.
[You learned the [Invisibility Veil: Lv1] Skill!] - nevianz1yrCommented
I guess the Dao changed after she died. it was only capable of attacking before.
I have also practiced some of my new Divinities and Daos, but the one I had yet to use was… the Dao of Summoning. The Dao of Gates granted the ability to create up to four Gates that can connect to another place where there is a Gate, literally just teleportation with extra steps. Like this, I can set up a Gate in this city and teleport there at any time by creating a Gate. - nevianz1yrCommented
Ten tactical tentacles tentatively tickle the target. Sorry anytime i see something with tentacles something like this comes to mind.
Suddenly, the Emperor's body, to our surprise, shapeshifted. Ten tentacles covered in black scales, presumably materialized Chaos Energy, clashed against me, trying to entangle me and stop me in my way while the Emperor dealt with Sol's blazing fire and beams of sunlight. - nevianz1yrCommented
Typo probably. The system called it grand terra before, I believe
Even if the memories of a life on Earth aren't mine, I really enjoy everything I learned from this random guy whose name I might never get the opportunity to know. The memories of an avid classic JRPG games fanatic really makes me want to keep this whole LitRPG System forever. I already missed how it poofed away when I turned into a Living Deity, so I might as well do everything I can to keep it. Amongst the things that I like about this new adventure (not so many), one of the things I love is that I can finally level up and have cool evolutions again… And well, the whole feel like I am in a new world is interesting, even though I've been trying my best to not grow any more interested or attached in Runeterra as I can, I've already grown slightly attached to it after the adventures I've lived… Even if it has only been a week since I was summoned. It has certainly been an unforgivable week. - nevianz1yrCommented
Please let her keep this when she goes back. If she doesnt roll around like sonic and crash into hel’s face i would be very sad
Heheh! I even leveled up Roll. It is a powerful Skill that let me roll around over any bastard that gets in front of me. I can use it with my giant, metallic body covered in spikes and really fuck up some shit if I want to. It's pretty awesome, isn't it? Yeah, I know!