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Rinion2yrCommentedCh 2304 Trial Start- Rinion2yrCommented
is she representing the past?
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for one ally, and for two how does exporting someone for a large sum of money make them your ally?
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personally I would have, just because they say she is stable doesn't mean that something won't happen. if you have the means and still refuse to use it because of something as silly as "cost" then you'll only be able to regret it if something happens in the future. but then again I would have also thrown myself into cultivating and bought all of the scripture because strength is the only true guarantee.
Author's Note: In the CEO's shoes, I don't think anybody would have used up the Water of Rejuvenation for Luo Ju Di, would they? It almost sounds callous when I say it now, but preparing for the Rainy Days seems like the standard choice, right? o.o Thanks for reading! - Rinion2yrCommented
sigh....Wolf Ryder? is this idiot serious?
Wait no, my name sucks. Fuck that shit. It's time to choose a cool name my parents were too boring to pick for me. - Rinion3yrCommented
Thanks for the chapter! Sorry to hear there have been so many thoughtless comments, Vahn is my favorite character out of any that I've read or seen in my 31 years of life and I read a lot. Unlike other characters Vahn puts a lot of thought into his actions and is always trying to do what he believes to be best, not just for himself but also for others, his enemies included. In the same position Vahn is what I would aspire to be like, he's a genuine good person who helps those around him selflessly because he himself understands suffering and wants to save lives rather than take them!
Ch 1880 Incongruency - Rinion3yrCommented
despite his sickly complexion* love you're story ein-sama, easily my favorite of all time and I read a lot!
Ignoring the hundred or so other Regulars that were eyeing them like exotic animals, Vahn allowed Phae to return to the Little Garden as he shifted his attention to the Ranker that was standing in the air. This time around, it was an exceptionally tall man, who, despite his sickly completion, appeared remarkably handsome with his intelligent features, glistening golden eyes, neatly styled white hair, and perfectly tailored clothes. - Rinion3yrCommented
sigh please spell check before posting, there's just been Soo many spelling errors and mistakes so far. I'm not saying it isn't readable or that I don't enjoy the story but going back over it once or twice would help a lot. 😉
"Melly is going to have to go through extensive physical construction for a year or two after her birthday. So you won't see her as much. But do not sorry. We will use voice stones to communicate every one and a while okay?" - Rinion3yrCommented
key should also be qi
Qi Refinding stage - When you cultivate this level your body gives off a royal blue glow with spiritual energy surrounding you. It helps with the fluctuations of key and how to control it's fluctuations. When you have reached the peak of this stage all of your veins and meridians will be as strong as titanium. - Rinion3yrCommented
guard should be God
Woahhhhhh! Wonder if the guard made a mistake and transmigrated me into some ancient Chinese world instead because this is something else. - Rinion3yrReplied to satan
that's true, I just felt that it would flow better since so many sentences have awkward spots in them. though I skipped most of the sentences that were strange.
How could Tang Li Xue use Huang Hao's divine ability?! - Rinion3yrCommented
dashed toward*
Huang Hao blended all with his nine shadow clones and dashed onto Instructor Mei Lan together with Hei Yinghao. - Rinion3yrCommented
she* was a little bit lacking*
Tang Li Xue's petite figure was split into seven! Although, he could only create six shadow clones and a little bit lacking compared to Huang Hao who could create nine shadow clones at once, but it was still enough to make them surprised. - Rinion3yrCommented
be using*
How could Tang Li Xue use Huang Hao's divine ability?! - Rinion3yrCommented
with a heavy heart*
In the end, Yaya decided to follow what Tang Li Xue told her with heavy-hearted and wait for her at the corner of the colosseum.