khirigaya_kazuto

The author is a lying pig; he joins the spirit hall. I don't know why people insist on having the protagonists of their Douluo fanfics accept masters; most protagonists learn nothing from their masters, and the master gets everything. This whole thing about having a master often doesn't make sense in the Douluo universe, unless the spirit is the same or somewhat similar. The protagonist didn't need a master; he was developing well, but when he joined the spirit hall and accepted a master, the fanfic became garbage to me.

The story was good, then this invasion arc came along. I don't know why I thought it would be different, even though there were a few changes in the fights and stuff, the result in the end remains the same. The MC fighting should be awesome, but it's just boring. He's too strong for these fights he had; it seems like the author didn't know what to write next and is dragging it out by showing these fights.

What works does he bring to this world? Or does he write original books? What works does he bring to this world? Or does he write original books?

The worst mistake in this story was keeping Naruto's personality. I can't watch Naruto again precisely because of that. The worst mistake in this story was keeping Naruto's personality. I can't watch Naruto again precisely because of that.

I'll stop for now until I release more chapters, then I can skip all the ones that show him in the ANBU. All the fanfics I've seen so far with the part where the protagonist joins the ANBU are extremely boring. There's nothing interesting about the ANBU, not even in the original work.

What a stupid MC, why didn't he make a stealth attack? It seems like everyone becomes stupid when they're reincarnated.

Dude, your story has more auxiliary chapters than regular chapters, and that's ridiculous. Just release all the auxiliary chapters together at once.

Dude, your story has more auxiliary chapters than regular chapters, and that's ridiculous. Just release all the auxiliary chapters together at once.

The idea of ​​using Fullmetal alchemy is good, but the MC is a complete idiot, he totally ruins the story and is also very stupid. The idea of ​​using Fullmetal alchemy is good, but the MC is a complete idiot, he totally ruins the story and is also very stupid.

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