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you're saying it's better than info dumps, bit he is still doing it, chapter 9 was only about information, the chapter that introduced Kevin was so confusing, dropping names without even explaing what it means, he is trying to do everything a the same time and it's failing. because it's becoming a inconsistent story.
out of thousands of novels in this website none stand's out like this one? talk about being delusional if you where to say this is the best you've read, i would understand. and just because you like a novel doesn't mean everyone has to like it, or do you like every single novel you encounter? if you don't that called being a hypocrite.
but, the food shortage only happened because our mc decided to start training as a infant, wich caused the parents to give him more food than the others because he was always hungry, so orpal was mad for not eating enough, the mc is supposed to be 30 something, he himself knew that what was doing was wrong but chose to continue, I'm sorry but I can't sympathize with our selfish mc here.
but the book is in 3rd person right? so is not Shang reference to himself as Alex but us observing Alex, so it doesn't make sense, god said that if he so much think of the name he will feel pain. but I'm starting to get annoyed because this just makes people more used to the name Alex.