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I love game system novels, depends on how the mc uses it. Intelligent, Harem, Handsome and etc. Not too overpowered and not any lesset either. Always depends on the writing style and quality. Mhm
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If you liked how I wrote the story and want another fanfic about Azeroth, you could join in to help me write a story together. I could make a discord and we can discuss about how the story will go, discussions about lore, system, power scaling, development and etc. On the other hand, I’ll just work on it by myself and somehow figure something out after months or years haha. I don’t mind it though, it’s a fun hobby. more productive, than playing games for hours senselessly. at least I can create something and show it to the world.
Thanks for pointing it out, I’ll fix that soon
You make a good point, I’ll try to provide a better explanation about the system as more combat-related, I’ll make revisions soon.
This novel has been revised into another version. The MC age to start his plans will still be the same, but everything else like how the system works is different. Your point about Calia is heard, I didn’t really think much of it. When I first wrote about it, it was made with the idea of making connections of why Calia was so opposed against King Terenas marriage arrangements when she got older. Because she already had feelings about someone she never forgot about since childhood. But thank you for the feedback, the next revised novel is less about romance, it’s more kingdom building type. Still learning how to make things natural as I go, I’m a new writer so any feedback you provide will help a lot.
Yeah I’m the original writer of this fanfiction. I personally think that Arthas’s ending in shadowlands is a major letdown. He was a ground-breaking character in Warcraft, that deserved better. At least redemption or another reappearance in shadowlands, but no it only just took advantage of his notoriety.
NEW UPDATE:! I revised the system status, so what I said before about their mana not increasing. That is no longer the case, it’ll increase based on the unit’s level. The level system will be the same as the Warcraft 3 Leveling system. I’ve also added (Potential) which is about how far they can level up to. That’s all that has changed for now.
Hey guys, I come to realize more things about the importance of world building, as I write more chapters. So as I’ve mentioned on author notes, I’ll be editing previous chapters as I go. I might even add a whole another chapter in between of the previous chapters, to add more depth to the story. … If you’re wondering why I’m still posting chapters if I still need to edit them, that’s because I read my own story in your POV. It helps me realize the discrepancies of the story and it allows to learn more as a writer. Trying to keep the flow of the story as smooth as I can with my writing ability. Lastly, I apologize if it bothers your experience of reading my novel. I promise you, once I get better as a writer in the future. I’ll probably make another fanfic about Azeroth with another plot, or write an original story myself. By then, the chapters will stay the same as it is posted.
Also now that you mention artifacts, you just gave me an idea about that. Thanks a lot, there will also be artifacts that will help increase his mana capacity, albeit only if he equips it. But such artifacts will be rare to find, only obtained through special quests or during his adventures.
I provided an explanation to the same question you have at chapter 10’s comment section. If you have any more questions or ideas, go for it!
Thanks for pointing it out! I’ll fix it.
Your ideas are great man keep it up, thanks a lot! I‘m going off of the information you’ve been providing me for ideas to lead his territory’s development. Once Arthas gets older I’ll start a vote for everyone cast, for who his love interest will be. For his personality, it would be similar to that an anti-hero, he still remains sympathetic and obligated to care for his people. He is a man who’ll do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, even if it appears extreme. And about his mana, training in arcane magic or of the sort will only decrease the mana consumption of his skills. Or boosts its power. But if you’re worried that he can’t utilize his skills due to his mana capacity, he’ll plan to use mana options brewed by alchemists to refill them in the future. It’ll cost time and resources to reach that point, which adds to his growing development of his territory.
I forgot to update that part, the structures will only train* not summon.
Correction: Every 8 seconds*
The maximum mana capacity remains at 100. If you were to tally how long he can maintain this state, It would be 1 minute and 20 seconds. In the scope of things, his invulnerbility is flawed as it already consumes 1/10 of his mana capacity every second. … In the future he’ll have more skills in his arsenal and the consumption of mana from those skills will limit his invulnerability as well. But if you have a better idea, I can change it.
Don’t worry I already have a format in mind for the building feature of the system. It won’t pop out of nowhere, it’s more like a blueprint for his subjects to build and the effects it has will be magical but not overpowered. But I like the idea you have of implementing other races’s or kingdoms technology. I’ll try to incorporate that into it’s function somehow. … For how to deal with the scourge, I’m still thinking about that. Since Arthas is possessed by another soul the events that’ll happen in the future won’t be the same, but similar scenarios will occur. Biggest dilemna I’m in right now is how he’ll make his first encounter with the scourge in the most logical way possible. If you have any more ideas about that I would love to see them. Or just any idea in general. … About the topic of him learning magic, I just have the idea of implenting the same power like in the Warcraft Domination, learning skills from his heroes. But not through skill points, but perhaps through quests with conditions. When he’s under their tutelage. The heroes won’t magically pop up either, once they have been summoned they will ‘coincidentally’ arrive to his base with a background of who they are and where they came from. If you want to see an example of how that works, check out Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate when people with unique backgrounds arrive at the MC’s doorstep. So it’ll be something similar to that.