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Ryuusei369

Ryuusei369

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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3691yr
    Replied to Vasiliy

    is this harem?

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    I Get A Random New Occupation Every Week
    Urban · No Right
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Project_Zero

    Author-san,take your time. It's very rare to find a good sports themed novel. So readers like me will definitely wait for you.

    Ch 1 1. The Beginning
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    The Diamond Field
    Sports · Project_Zero
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    I like the concept but author-san you need to do some serious editing so that the readers would stick with this

    Ch 1 1. The Beginning
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    The Diamond Field
    Sports · Project_Zero
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    Wouldn't his family and friends notice his sudden changes? Or is the plot armour taking care of it for him?

    Ch 4 Strengthening the Body
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    I Don’t Want To Be Popular
    Urban · Vermillion Bird’s Solo Flight
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Malignant

    Thanks for clarifying that. I was surprised at the inconsistencies between former and later chapters. You are right in the fact that MC doesn't mistreat women and doesn't consider them romantic interests. But all the powerful female characters introduced so far are either mesmerized by his looks, power or both and have romantic inclinations towards him. I find that a bit disappointing. Why can't a female character find him powerful and just admire him? Why the need for them to fall in love and follow along like puppets? I also find the lack of male characters(who are not villains or admirers) concerning. Why can't the MC take on a male apprentice? While I am glad you have many powerful female characters(compared to most), we need similarly powerful male characters too... Otherwise even if it is not a harem, it gives the ambience of one. I hope you don't find my review offensive. I just feel strongly on the subject.

    Ch 15 Deep Sea Spring Dew
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    The Immortal's Wine Store
    Eastern · Malignant
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Evelcior

    This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Evelcior

    This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Evelcior

    This is a harem novel. Just not a harem of professors.

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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Posted

    I read the first 39 chapters and was disappointed by how the author managed to ruin what could have been quite a promising story. So I decided to skip ahead and read the ending and it is a harem. The annoying female character introduced in the beginning is one of MC's lovers. He has 3 wives? partners? The author has a habit of writing pathetic female characters making me wonder about the kind of person they are... I feel so offended by the portrayal of women. So I am dropping this novel.

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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to yayamasthura

    I fear that the author is going to make her the FL....

    Ch 27 Night Talk At Lover’s Slope
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    You are dragging that annoying girl into every interaction. I swear I will quit if she is the FL. These days you can't enjoy a novel without a shi**y romantic subplot...

    Ch 26 This World Is Too Small
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    I hope this serves as a lesson to him to not use the system products without caution. He can't always escape like this without giving away any information. That being said from a moral point of view he did the right thing in trying to save a life. But sometimes the road to hell is paved with good intentions...

    However, it would be something if Yang Liqun could publish the treatment protocol to The Lancet in his name. 
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to blancker1

    True. Everyone other than Wu Yan do not have a good character so far. And she was described as an idiot. Author either only knows these type of women or doesn't like women in general. There is no strong female character. I hope it changes in the future.

    Ch 24 Jinx
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to yayamasthura

    She is a spoiled brat who thinks the world owes her... Frankly I would root for a more mature FL

    Ch 21 Timely Help
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to DrSpoozer

    Dude not all of us are like that. These kind of women are a special subspecies...

    Ch 20 Zhou Wen, You Deserve To Be Single
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    No no!! Don't tell me she is the FL.... Please don't make such an annoying person the FL

    Ch 17 Xu Shuangyu’s Allegation
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to DesertRat

    Yeah but usually those kind of girls have equally stuck up bfs too or the protagonist breaks up with them. But here if this follows the pattern of nearly every similar novels, the author is going to show her so called 'cute' side and the mc will think she is not that bad at all. I honestly don't get this. True she may not be the wicked witch of the West like the lab senior girl. But she is pretty bad on her own...

    Ch 14 Greenhorn
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Commented

    Don't make that girl the fl. I beg you author. So many good novels have been ruined by unsuitable female leads.

    Ch 11 The Path To Awesomeness
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Ryuusei369

    Sorry for the rant. I feel strongly about this topic.

    Ch 9 Gain Experience
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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  • Ryuusei369
    Ryuusei3693yr
    Replied to Domn

    Same. I really don't understand people who say one thing and expect others to do something entirely else. She too had a part in why she fell. She saw him in the path but didn't avoid him. I don't think she was running at such a high speed she couldn't. And then she refused help and then thought why he didn't help her. I have a bad feeling she is going to be popping up again and force him to help her with something because she feels he owes her.Thats the usual plotline.I honestly hope the mc is not an idiot who gives into her just because she is a pretty woman. As a woman myself, I find it off-putting...

    Ch 9 Gain Experience
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    Supreme Pharmacist System
    Sci-fi · Second General
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