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please use the English 'Hephaestus' spelling otherwise good story
man your storytelling is awesome will be reading your new fic see you there with a couple powerstones to boost it
i like the story just feel like the MC is being a brat all the time, freedom is also not letting others opinions affect ur choices which he constantly does here by rejecting rias for how it would appear to society which is def stupid
don't let thé haters bother you, thé story is wel written
tekkai forces you to stand still if I remember correctly fun story otherwise
he has the devilfruit integration into weapon why not zoom zoom into a telescope or binoculars woulda been a fun gadget or put it on the marksmans scope actually had some fun potential to show you didn't include rewards for the sake of being rewards and mc thinks about how to utilise the things he gets...besides this I am really enjoying the story great work man
Great story absolutely love the way you shape most characters and give everyone their own spotlight!!! keep it up author and take all my powerstones lmao
I have been looking at it it's just really weird with the taiwanees they use which causes names and stuff to be jumbled up besides that there are a lot of other struggles in this book for translating might still do it but that's a big maybe
hey author I thought this looked like an interesting story. I would really love to be allowed to translate this story and give people the option to read this in English.
there is another one on webnovel exactly like this in better English @author maybe wanna use that one to translate from its probably easier