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Sayl3yrReplied to AnWanUuuhm I don't suppose your looking for a proper editor still? I read the first few chapters and it's almost impossible to get through, I'd offer my services. I'm not the fastest editor but I am a good one. Although I would require some payment, maybe like 5$ per 1500 words? I'm not sure about the price, but we can discuss that. But if you like the idea add me on discord. Sayl #3198
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Why's that surprising if it is his brother's duaghter I'm surprised she's older than 6.
Surprisingly it was the youngest girl in the group. She didn't look like she was older than 13 'I guess I did forget to ask Tyreek how old his niece was.' - Sayl3yrReplied to kundilicious
I got that reference.
Hash sneered "Hell yeah I'm angry. Dude called me a burnt ass chicken nugget. He was talking so much shit just because he beat me during the drill. - Sayl3yrCommented
Gotta disagree with your reasoning on this one chief, love the story by the by. But it's a bit farfetched, comparing someone who works himself to the bone getting out of playing time because of outside interference and a couple of lazy dudes who don't wanna put in the work. Personally I'd rework that bit.
And now he had done the same thing to Manny and the other 8th graders. They didn't have the skills to make it past any tryouts for a high school team. - Sayl3yrReplied to Napknight
Sitting shotgun is the expression for when people sit next to the driver.
Jason and Kyle rode in Coach Swendel's environment and wallet friendly electric car. Kyle had to sit shotgun because it was more accommodating to his height than the back seats. - Sayl3yrReplied to RedClover
With a name like Phoenix Phire if he doesn't I'll be kinda upset xD
He had assumed that Cyphix was small; however, that wasn't the case. The roads were made from a brown stone that gripped his shoes when he walked. The shops were made of red brick, and narrow alleyways separated most of them. As a former arsonist, he noted that Cyphix was unlikely to burn down to the ground. - Sayl3yrCommented
Pro-bono work probably wouldn't a word used in another world.
"Not enough coin for that either," said Charles. "Triple Threat are known for their generosity and pro-bono work, so I could get them for free, but when they found themselves stumped, I had no options left."