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The novel is surprisingly good. But I admit that is not the style of many readers. the MC is neutral evil. Negative point: the first chapter. It would be better if the novel started from the second chapter. I don't know how to put into words why. I almost gave up reading right there.

I agree. i am reading the original now with google trans. Is much better. Sad that they do that. Thank you for the warning.

I really liked the text. But I think you should be careful with the paragraphs. Large blocks of text tend to make reading difficult. Ideally, paragraphs between 3 and 6 lines are easy to read. I found it very difficult to follow the reading in this massive block of text.