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im pretty sure that she told bibi dong earlier that demon fox was her
i love the story and want you to keep translating but at like chapter 20 did you just stop trying? its getting worse and worse. its starting to sound more like robots talking then people.
its not just that that bothers me. i could deal with all of that stuff and just treat it as a slice of life. but something else bothers me that i don't really know how to explain. its like she lets mordred lead her around or something idk what it is really but i don't like it.
Really good, i loved. but like some of the other comments said the same gag gets annoying. honestly i just started skipping his internal monologues and acting like they weren't there.
love the story great job. how strong is she going to get? like up there with the star wars legend guys?................................................
i love it. you are doing a very good job and i also love how often you update. I love stories where they do manga and other things from our universe in another but it is hard to find good ones or ones that update and continue. this is do all things perfectly.
in you previous chapters didn't you say he had already mastered all fighting techniques from the custodian. why is he going around relearning everything he already knows
love the story. just asking to be sure because it doesn't say but is there romance? fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller
so glad you continued, love this tvd fic.
again kotone is in tokyo just call her