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Fightas89

Fightas89

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Game-Elements,Apocalypse, fanfiction

2018-04-12 JoinedGermany
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas893mth
    Replied to kamidemond

    lol did you even listen to yourself

    A/N: Did you like the chapter? Took me a long time to write. I am afraid that I went a little overboard with his fight. Considering that he is just 11 but goddammit. Stop thinking that he is weak. Magical is not everything. It's the Guts to never give up, what's matters.
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    HP: Magic Punk
    Book&Literature · kamidemond
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas897mth
    Posted

    overall a very good story with checking all the points, only thing in my opinion that could be improved is a little more action, it feels like a semi-slice of life till now.

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    IN Harry Potter With a System
    Book&Literature · Dreamer_1297
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas897mth
    Commented

    you still alive?

    Ch 22 A new one
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    Mahouka, Rebirth as Tatsuya
    Anime & Comics · Sky_Demon_Order
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas898mth
    Commented

    ty

    Ch 2 Neilie wants to explore
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    Naruto: Sakura's Symbiote [Rewrite]
    Anime & Comics · PrincessThrone
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas898mth
    Commented

    ty

    Ch 61 Chapter 61
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    ty

    Ch 60 Chapter 60
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    can I just forget about ever reading this chapter? its just disappointing. its like an author trying to forcefully crash a new fanfic in his old which he has given up on. Totally story break, nerfing/crashing mc and bringing up totally out of context new storyline...would have been better if the last chapter would have been the end of the ff like a dramatic ending with mc sacrificing himself (if he rescued his child).

    Ch 106 A New Era
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    Corrupting Worlds
    Anime & Comics · Sinning_Sovereign
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    as always a good reading time, nothing to complain

    Ch 58 Chapter 58 (R-18)
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    welcome back

    Ch 29 Chapter 28 : Apologizing and First Day of School
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    Werewolf İn Twilight
    Movies · Lazyauthor46
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    thx for chapter, good work

    Ch 55 Chapter 55
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Replied to daniel_rahn

    I applaud for you being so upfront, tho totally feel ya there

    Ch 76 chapter 74 - Hidden storyline mission
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    Infinite Evolution: A spy in multiverse
    Movies · _Crimson_
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Replied to ZonicZ

    his 3rd stupid wish was being the son of karl falco (ofc the most usefull wish of them all)...u can reread ch2

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  • Fightas89
    Fightas899mth
    Commented

    so far mc feels kinda useless in my opinion, 3 wishes for what? for being a jake 2.0? nearly no difference to canon just changed the name of the mc

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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8910mth
    Replied to SrCuervo

    yeah then tell me why it isnt used for that at all? the only functions so far being used is for diat tips and text information how to treat a wound. really great tool so far

    After much thought, Jacob chose the Advanced Artificial Intelligence Machine. Jacob chose this for simple reasons, namely that this support tool would help him in 90% of the worlds he goes to, not to mention that it's 100%.
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    The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8910mth
    Replied to Pyrologicas

    keep reading the ff and come to me again...

    After much thought, Jacob chose the Advanced Artificial Intelligence Machine. Jacob chose this for simple reasons, namely that this support tool would help him in 90% of the worlds he goes to, not to mention that it's 100%.
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    The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8910mth
    Commented

    great he did take the most uninteresting thing with no way to improve/progress

    After much thought, Jacob chose the Advanced Artificial Intelligence Machine. Jacob chose this for simple reasons, namely that this support tool would help him in 90% of the worlds he goes to, not to mention that it's 100%.
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    The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8910mth
    Commented

    thanks for your hard work

    Ch 46 Chapter 46
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    Harem in a Labyrinth
    Anime & Comics · Avi2112
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8910mth
    Commented

    story is bad so far. author is nerfing and making mc weak just so he can follow a storyplot author has in mind. not a good way for forcing the story to go a certain way.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 [Edited]
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    A New One Hundred
    TV · LoserIam
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8911mth
    Commented

    lol gonna put it in libary but will have to reread if hiatus if over

    Ch 43 Chapter 43: We're back in the Blackness of Space!
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    The 100: The Story of A King!
    TV · G3neral_Kenobi4_
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  • Fightas89
    Fightas8911mth
    Commented

    no rewrite or fixing of grammar needed at all,neither on chaps you wrote yourself or used google translator on. There is no major hiccup or to much mistakes to break reading flow. So just continue your good work and don´t worry about it.

    Ch 13 Chapter 12 : Rest of the Night
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    Werewolf İn Twilight
    Movies · Lazyauthor46
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