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lol did you even listen to yourself
can I just forget about ever reading this chapter? its just disappointing. its like an author trying to forcefully crash a new fanfic in his old which he has given up on. Totally story break, nerfing/crashing mc and bringing up totally out of context new storyline...would have been better if the last chapter would have been the end of the ff like a dramatic ending with mc sacrificing himself (if he rescued his child).
his 3rd stupid wish was being the son of karl falco (ofc the most usefull wish of them all)...u can reread ch2
so far mc feels kinda useless in my opinion, 3 wishes for what? for being a jake 2.0? nearly no difference to canon just changed the name of the mc
yeah then tell me why it isnt used for that at all? the only functions so far being used is for diat tips and text information how to treat a wound. really great tool so far
keep reading the ff and come to me again...
great he did take the most uninteresting thing with no way to improve/progress