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LeafLetters1yrCommentedyou mean redeeming quality?
'So... who's next?' he thought to himself as his eyes darted in all directions. Pickpocketing is a difficult job. He can't just start robbing random people and lot of time and patience are needed for all the other conditions to meet. Though his one redundant quality is that, he only robs rich @ssholes.- LeafLetters1yrCommented
realistic -> materialistic
Hina knew it might seem realistic, but this was how reality works after all. - LeafLetters1yrCommented
that's canon in the Bakiverse. There was one elite fighter who wanted to take revenge on Yuujiro Hanma and so he trained himself up to be able to deliver super human slaps that would cause agony to even the most well trained, freak of nature body in existence. It was so dumb..
"Ouch! Ouch! Ayaka-nee!" Shishio felt miserable since his waist was twisted by Ayaka. It might seem weird, but no matter how strong the human body was and how tough they had tried their durability, they would feel pain when they were pinched or slapped. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
Buried treasYaaarr
Aokiji buried the pure gold at a safe place in the village since he knew this thing was not much of use now. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
The sin of sloth lies in not taking action when it your duty requires you to. It occurs when you choose, either from fear or laziness, to ignore something so you don't have to deal with the consequences of stepping up to take action. The choice made to avoid unpleasantness means you betray your integrity.
First, I thought it was physical laziness. While laziness is undoubtedly an element of sloth, there's more to this sin than just laziness. After some thinking, I narrowed it down to four factors— carelessness, unwillingness to act, half-hearted effort, and becoming easily discouraged by any possible difficulty. So let's ask some questions," said Quinn. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
bady swap jutsu, no?
Thinking of the shortcomings of this technique, and also thinking of the Furō Fushi no Jutsu that Orochimaru was about to develop in the near future Kuroto 's heart really revered it. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
relocate not reallocate
"Yes, a simple, honest-to-magic job," said Quinn, "a job that'll earn you money and allow you to start a life of your own. I can even reallocate you far away from here so that your father can't just whisk you away back to continue the family legacy. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
he's raging and just been stabbed so clearly he should be in the right headspace to give a philosophical lecture. .
"You say you`re perfect, but the concept of an ideal is wrong itself and even cannot exist. An ideal implies that there are no disadvantages you, but that`s itself a drawback. Because of that, the whole concept collapses and becomes meaningless. What's more, an ideal can't become better." - LeafLetters2yrCommented
wow, that was inelgantly put
[ Ability Description: Your sense for 1. gazes on you 2. undetected danger 3. enemy threat level have been heightened after toggling on this ability ] - LeafLetters2yrReplied to Axes
the percentage is straightforward. 100% is when you acheive your full potential on that tier of existence. what's vague is how your potential compares to everyone else.
Physique Level: Common - Late 80% - LeafLetters2yrCommentedCh 1 Five years old
- LeafLetters2yrReplied to LeafLetters
unless your mc starts as a total coward, i suppose. but having your main character be spiritually Unable to grow a spine by naturally overcoming challenges in the story seems dumb. .
Willpower (WILL) = A measure of the character's mental resistance against pain, fear, and other types of ailments when falling victim to mind-altering magic, torture, or insanity. The higher the will, the harder it is to break. - LeafLetters2yrCommented
totally useless stat. the main character will pass every critical will save as it is required by the narritive. including WIL just complicates things for no gain to the story
Willpower (WILL) = A measure of the character's mental resistance against pain, fear, and other types of ailments when falling victim to mind-altering magic, torture, or insanity. The higher the will, the harder it is to break. - LeafLetters2yrPosted
really poor grammar and spelling in this one. the conversations the characters have are really inelegant too, although the story is fast paced enough that it isn't unbearable. still it's a real clunker. if the author went back over his story and read it aloud to proofread it it would be vastly improved.