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It would be interesting if he didn't kill, at least infrequently. This way we could have more arcs and it would be very consistent when he focuses on several heroines in the future. The rewrite is going great and I hope his power progress is slow. There is no need for a slow power progression nerf because of the different sizes and sources of different powers which can be difficult to manage, so you can have everything happen naturally and with appropriate and moderate restrictions. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.
The premise is fun but the author's lack of experience and the rush to unfold the story takes away the introspection of the MC and his unusual situation, there is no interaction with the characters around him and goes straight to the system, how they reacted to the appearance of the system it was too abrupt and forced generating a bit of discomfort, with that the chapters are too short and with little information, the story was rushed and without immersion with the MC or the situation in which he finds himself.