Gilgil

Thanks for the chapter, but I would like to remind you about Dai Mubai's innate soul power worth 96 which was talked about a few chapters ago, it would be good if he could refine it quickly and skip a few levels quickly and there wouldn't be a hole in the script. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

This fic started very well in terms of plot, writing and update rate, but the MC's actions, decisions and excuses about his career that in the end made him a waste ended up ruining everything. Overall, it's a good place to spend time, but I don't recommend it very much.

You forgot the information he got, he should report that there is a traitor passing information to the enemy and that the objective is nine caldas. It would be right and would give a lot of EXP as the war can be influenced with this information.

Mimi

have your well-deserved vacation, rest and be free.

Goodby Akira Toriyama

It would be interesting if he didn't kill, at least infrequently. This way we could have more arcs and it would be very consistent when he focuses on several heroines in the future. The rewrite is going great and I hope his power progress is slow. There is no need for a slow power progression nerf because of the different sizes and sources of different powers which can be difficult to manage, so you can have everything happen naturally and with appropriate and moderate restrictions. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Great start to the story. I just didn't like that the MC didn't get the most Op advantage. Body control is very broken, like really broken. Other than that it's incredible.