SwiftFate

I'd also like to note that I am happy that our MC isn't necessarily overshadowing Goku or even Vegeta in this story. Obviously he eventually will, or more likely be on par with them. But it's good that he isn't taking away from their achievements and is actually making changes where they surpass canon levels. A Goku with no scruples is pretty badass not gonna lie. A Vegeta with the influence of Nappa and vice versa? Also really badass and grounding for him

Huh. Was looking like for a moment Goku would have to wait to achieve SS, but this I did not expect. I also have no doubt that this is a MUCH stronger form of Goku in Super Saiyan. He won't hold back anything now. Like said, when a truly good man hits that bottom line.. Run. Frieza genuinely fucked up on that one.

I like the idea of them being forced to retreat and Goku not immediately achieving Super Saiyan through Krillens death. The only downside of this course is that one of Goku's most iconic and useful abilities in Instant Transmission will be skipped cause he didn't eat I mean train with the aliens on his way back to Earth. Also opens up a lot more potential Frieza content if he isn't defeated here and only bloodied.

Vegeta deserves a win. Toriyama always did him so dirty in canon

What an a$$pull 🤣

That bloodlust was probably Slug or another threat Frieza was warned to stay away from.. things may get complicated.

Lol what? This isn't a crossover, the MC just takes inspiration for some of his moves that have potential applications

Patreon yes. So long as you offer a reasonable amount of chapters in advance for a reasonable price I will absolutely pay to read this series hahaha

I like what you did with Jeice, making him more..talented. It makes sense in a way, that without the blinders on he actually has a lot of potential with Ki manipulation. And Ginyu is pretty naturally talented himself. I think they both have some hidden depth there

Awesome. Bit of a dumb move on their part for not just offing Ginyu, but it tracks with Vegeta's arrogance at this point in the story. I'm actually glad Jeice and Ginyu survived to possibly come back later. Just as I'm hoping Frieza will retreat rather than die. I think they have a lot more to offer as future antagonists and even potential allies in this universe.