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LonelySago

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I like my puns intended.

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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago1mth
    Replied to TheProMe

    For some it does, for some it doesn't. Like you..

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  • LonelySago
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    Replied to Aquartiz

    Oh. True. I've re-read it. And i stand corrected.

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  • LonelySago
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    Replied to AppleyGod

    If you and the author included the Variants, then it will be 50 yrs. But in this paragraph the only conflict was with the Villains. Variants were just monsters.

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  • LonelySago
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    How? 2001 was the start, then the Zahak guy died at 2040? You are correct though ,it wasn't 40yrs. It only took 39 yrs.

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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Replied to wolf_Master

    I can "wholeheartedly" say that I pity you.. The shocking part is you being shocked by your own dumbfoundedness finding this work one of the best..

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  • LonelySago
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    Commented

    You should've just said 40yrs.. Smh

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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    Further.. Hope it's still a typographical error.

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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    Peoples.. I hope it's just a typographical error.

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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    Leo. Names should start in a capital letter. Hope this helps to improve your writing.

    The system answered making leo nod in understanding "So how did I come to have this Werewolf bloodline?, and is there another way to unlock more of the bloodline traits without missions" Theo asked as he took a sip of his wine.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    The confusing "backstory".

    I suggest you go to the auxiliary Chp with the title "backstory", so you don't get confused when something relating the mcs backstory is brought up, I hope you enjoy.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    Confusing af.. What memories? The memories related to superheroes? What do you mean by 'he grew up thinking that his world was normal'? Did he reincarnate as a baby? Or the original owner of the body thought the world was normal?

    And that is when his rebirth into the marvel world started, he didn't gain his memories right off the bat so he grew up thinking that his world was normal, joined the police force at 18, became S.W.A.T officer at 21 climbed the ranks and became a comander at age 23, led his team to many succes for two years before he submitted a form of retirement, nobody knows why he did that, but after all the great deeds he had done, his form of retirement was accepted, and thats how he became the youngest swat officer to retire from duty at the age of 25.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago3mth
    Commented

    Why shoot your own leg? You masochist bro?

    As long as I didn't make a move on her it should be fine, right? ...I mean I have platonic relationships with two other attractive females... Kara would be so mad once she heard about my new roommate... Sigh. This wouldn't end well.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    I like my puns intended..

    Strange, a strange name by the way, pun intended, nodded and said with excitement "Of course, master. I won't disappoint you." The Ancient One shook his head at his words and said "You won't disappoint me unless you die. The one you shouldn't disappoint is yourself. Now, before the three of you go, I would like to give my young friend Edward a gift."
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    Bro.. Its not even 2000's.. What the hell are you expecting?

    I already had enough liquid capital to start, all I needed was to code the entire thing, and build the business model from basically zero. Funny thing, Ebay does exist here, weird right, Amazon doesn't exist, but Ebay does, the weirdest thing is, Ebay came after Amazon.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    Potato, Pota-to...

    "Oh, you mean that woman, oh… ok, I thought you meant blonde blonde, not white haired," Potato potatoes, same shit.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    I like this part.. I never saw the bald guy as a good guy.. He's a creepy dude, Magneto realized it and felt violated. Would love to see the bald guy die from heartache, or any form of mental torture..

    "It's not a threat Raven, it's a promise, I meant every word I said, and I know you guys will protect him… but I will still do it if he does this shit again, heck… just this once, read my mind charles, and see how determined I am…" I smiled at him.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Replied to Nirerin

    I think like... Never?

    Such a nice lady makes me really sad that libraries will basically become obsolete in about a decade.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    In what world do libraries get obsolete??

    Such a nice lady makes me really sad that libraries will basically become obsolete in about a decade.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Commented

    1992 is a different time.. After 9/11, American immigration got really strict..

    Finding the library was easy enough, I just walked up to a cop, asked him, and he took me to the library. Why did I approach a cop without legal documentation, risking my possible stay in the states? Well, if there is something I have learned about not having documents is… to not be suspicious, the more relaxed and calmed you look, the less deportable you look. Also helps that I wasn't doing somewhere where documentation was required.
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  • LonelySago
    LonelySago4mth
    Replied to Zenos_Ashblade

    They are i can see that, being proud is a sign of emotion too. but i think based on dbz canon, saiyans are quite indifferent. Not unfeeling but slightly uncaring. Recall how raditz, nappa and vegeta mingled, how vegeta treated them, how raditz talked to goku when they met and a lot of similar instances. Would you be the same on how you treat your subordinates? So as the human soul and saiyan body merge, the human soul can slightly mitigate the inherent characteristics of the saiyan body. You get what i mean? That's why i praised author-san for the good portrayal of these conflicting things. To sum things up, i basically agree to your statement. And thank you for reading this rant.😅😂

    A dam of suppressed emotions about the past and present events just broke through. Tears would be dripping down my face, but unlike before in the cold dark lonely prison cell, they were absorbed by a person that I knew would support me to the end.
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