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It has potential but here are too many things that annoys me like hell. 1- The "¿System?": The System is just a voice the serves to put comments in certain moments to put a little of humour or act like as the MC psychologo. So where does MC strenght come from? From a "pact" witha god he made in chapter 5 or 6, a with that he have another voice in his head. And from hes overpowered bloodlines So the system has some information about the game [characters], or weakness of the creatures or how to grow strong? No, literally nothing. So how much did the system aport? Well, it gave the MC a basic sword at the start, and then the MC buys a Mask and thats ALL. At the start looked like it would be a "Dat sim" System, who gives choices about the heroines and "points of affection" but that function seems to have dissapear. And in a moment the system came with a new "great function" but in next chapter is forgotten. 2. The "original" villain, wich MC takes his body: He is a lustful person and everybody hates him but when he was a kid he was the biggest genius, all de heroines loved him and was a kind a handsome boy. So when the MC show his talent is like: "oh, he is back at what he was". What a bullshit. 3- There are too many plotholes 4- He loved a single women in his 1st life (and she died). When he transmigrates obviusly he miss her, and is a logic thing. And he has the original body memory (16 years old). Why Im saying this? Suddenly when the MC is thinking about love he is "oh a didnt have luck.. the only GIRLS I have loved..." And starts naming girls from the original body chilhood body when he had 7 years old. Come on men, you loved deeply, 3 girls, and when you had 7 years?
Bro, deal with Esdeath because of the public opinion? Is if a non-supernatural world I would think is okay, after all the image and politic is very important. But you are in a world where 1 man-army exist, where you could blow-up entire mountains in a second with Shikouteizer, or summon the dead with a katana. Where a powerful beast could destroy an entire nation. Is a world where actual power (not the illusion of money) exist. You have the strongest human in the world in your side, who can freeze an entire land and even stop time. But you want to be her enemy because of the image of the empire? That she is violent? Man, even in our world the church just burned people alive daily and everybody still worships them.
Bro, remember that the child emperor is far from be vulnerable. And probably is the strongest if you consider just raw power. After all he has the first and "strongest" Teigu, Shikouteizer "defending machine god" Just with the the energy barrier that it creates, means that there is almost no one who can hurt him in the actual time (maybe the only exception at this point in the timeline would be Esdeath)
I think it is beacause when they often transmigrate the angry birds is already created or have similar games, like you say it was created years before Flappy bird. Another reason is that Flappy Birds is a easy game to create, its just a bird who fly when you touch the screen. While angry birds it may look simple but the mechanics to create it aren't a one person job. Plus, one of the reason why Angry birds its so succesfull are the constants actualizations with new birds, enemies and escenarios; while Flappy bird its just a bird who flaps, so no need for actualizations. Conclusion: A lot easier to do it, and no need for actualizations or complex work
Good work. I have a question: Would you ad another verses? I mean, I really enjoy the story like it is but I think that in somepoint it would turn repetitive. Modern family is good but at the same time when you have a MC like Edward who has that many high level skills and can obtain even more with his cheat, the verse would be "small".
Amazing job, and good chapter but a I found two things in this chapter that are a little weird: 1- $300 per night? Thats to crazy, the common salary per month is about $1000. 2- Dont overcharge our MC schudele, he is running hes dad bussines, he is with his music, teaching hes friend to programm and now hes going to produce a music video for someone else? Thats a new and annoying thing that not help with nothing, the amount of time it require to make and produce a video is not about 1 day, it took weeks working on it at full time
The first chapters are annoying. The Mc do things that Im sure no "reincarnator" would do. MC has no secrets, any time it happen something he tells everyone, if he achieve something he tells everyone, etc. The relations are to 'bidimensionals', it feels like are robots who says the things or like they speak twitter phrases.
Well, I really dont like it. Not only the fact that he tell it to someone, but he even make a meeting and call other people to tell it. When a Mc tell someone I really find it annoying but if its look like a really good story I could go on. But in this case, I cant go on, he made a meeting to tell everyone about the reincarnation.
If I'm no wrong, tony iq is 185. The reason why he is still better than other with higher iq (excepting reed) is beacuse of his creative mind. I mean, higher iq only means faster learning, memorizing and calculations. There is a point where just be faster doesn't meaning anything (like having 150 billion dolars or having 200 billion dolars, there is a point where the utility of the money goes down until is meaningless), where the creative mind has the adventage. This is the case with spidey, who has a equal or even higher iq than richards but richards is far away from him
Nah, this speed is perfect. Xiao yan cultivation speed could be "faster" but thats because he is always in death/life situations and explores forbidden or forgotten sites like graves or mountains with insane levels of danger where the only why to survive is by plot armor. When our MC made that he breaktrough 7 levels in a week and obtained a Celestial flame. But now he is growing in a safe envoirement, after all with his Simulator he is very conciens that you could die in any moment if you doesn't have a ridiculus plot armor like cultivation novel protagonist. Plus he is self-learning alchemy an is in the 6 level, where in the dou continent 9 is the limit
So, a simple apprentice attack with a sword his nephew and Arlo just says go think what you done. Really? "Just a Barwolf can despise him" but attack to kill with a sword is okay? I hope Roy kill the apprentice and even if not kill Arlo don't be in god terms besides obviously Arlo is going to be some kind of teacher or master
I feel sorry for Kushina, she gain a Loyal soldier but she loose a friend If its a simple body restrictin seal Idon't care but it says that he would be inable to have bad intentions, so is a seal that affects his mind and thoughts. I know that he would be fine, after all he is the MC, but the MC himself don't know it. And the second annoying thing is that kushina would be super conditioned because 1- His friend now is unnable to dislike her o hurt her so is super empty relationship, in consecuence for now on, she can't now if he is with her for the mind conditional seal or for his will 2- this has two realistic ending "she stay with him for guilt" or "she don't stay with him because she want something real, someone who chose her not some who is obligated to be with her". You can say that im overthinking but thats how real relationships works. The simple fact that become a boss of your friend change the relationship and put it in danger, imagine knowing he can't have any kind of bad intention or hurt her despite what horrible things she could do to him. Imagina knowing that you can spit in your friend face and kill his mother but he wont have bad intentions to you, its weird, even more if its a love interest