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    And so after he sighed, he said after his breath in a low voice that none would hear him. what did he say?

    Ch 7 Unexpected Progress
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    From Player To Npc
    Games · TheShingPen
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  • lkJSEDcnK
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    can you change the [young female] to something along the line a young female voice said. i like your writing style and i hope you keep it up, but i think leave just name of one speaking should change. anyway thanks for the chapter, and this just a suggestion.

    Ch 2 The Old Life (Part 2)
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    From Player To Npc
    Games · TheShingPen
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    The key is to hurt the enemy more than he can (hurt) me and the best method of doing this is trough ensuring, when I hit him, the weapon will be efficient

    Ch 4 Some of the limits
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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