MC is likeable, but ML has too many red flags (I cannot). I admittedly skip some parts if ML is there because it's too much cringe and it's a HUGE NO NO. If you ever encounter people with behaviors like that of ML's in real life such as being possessive and non-consensual in his advances, then I suggest you: RUN. Dom is funny, but he is only more like the reader's avatar that constantly ships the leads. I don't know much about the purpose of his character aside being an assistant and a readers' avatar. As for other characters, the father is kinda okay? But the others are more just backgrounds, not much depth. As for the storyline, it's no different from most stories here in the same genre. Same secret genius MC; same ultimate rich, cold, stiff, handsome ML; same jealous villains who are less smart than them; etc. Too much tell, not much show. I'm mainly referring to the plot. She's done this, then that. And voila! She's ultra rich! It's so hard to form any emotional bond with the character. They are too superficial, not much relatable. Like gurllll, you're a trader, a hacker, a computer programmer, composer, singer, but still manage to have time for everything. What are you--- god? Plus, you instantly got rich just for a few days of trading, without any losses? You must be lady luck! I'm too sleepy to elaborate much. But I do hope not to discourage the author. Instead, view this somewhat as pointers to write better.

Oh myy... this is so sweet 💕

Aren't they fraternal twins? Why is the twin refer to their dad as "my dad" and hers alone? Can't she just say "dad?" Even if Jinhee is not favored, they still share the same father. Like guuurl, whose sperm did you come from?

Same thoughts. Maybe in the previous life, Taehee and Jaehyun switched bodies and they tried to switched back to their original bodies---hence, the kiss. Then, the three of them went back in time.

Who?? When was this 'Zhou Jingren' been mentioned? Is this in the future chapters? Or is there a prequel to this webnovel?

Mad Hatter's POVs never fail to amuse me 😂😂

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I love the riddle part. Very witty.

Your story was doing great until this churu came! Please tell me it's not going to be in the story for the next chapters until it ends?!! I CAN'T KEEP READING CHU CHU CHUUUU!!!! Was it supposed to be cute? It's hella annoying!

Except for Adeline Grant's works, I don't like all Qidian's stories. Too overpowered, too cliched, too many unrelatable Mary Sue characters, too much dilly-dallying, bad writing, too many misused words, too many useless dialogues, and pointless characters and arcs. BUT this may be an exception. So far, this story provides great promise, and I'll be reading on.

I thought she was talking about her past life when she slapped her step-sister. I only realized that slapping her step-sister was already at the current timeline when she mentioned that she would like her son to hate his father. Please show, don't just tell. Tell us what she felt, her emotions, her thought process. Let us readers feel her anger. And please make use of the spaces. Spaces are your friend. Group sentences into related sets. Spaces help reading easy to the readers' eyes.

So confusing. Try to not introduce too many characters at once, especially when their names are difficult to remember.