Ok, fine no loose ends. Did I miss the part where he killed or mind wiped Lette. Author-san is not fully committed

I can understand not wanting an over powered MC but the wishes themselves have to make sense for readers. One way to limit a MC is simply only grant 1 wish or have the ROB say no to some OP wishes or attach conditions.

WTF. Couldnt even get past the second chapter. MC is as stupid as fuc%. First he didnt even try to figure out if the system prioritize his life or the data. Secondly he didnt even ask if he was immune to the virus or even get powers from it. Thirdly he spent almost all his money on useless guns when he could have staked out and grabbed all the weapons locker and confiscated weapons at work. He knows RE zombies dont go inactive so a homebase, food, water, medicine, fuel, cold weapons and specialized equipment (generators, etc) are much more vital than guns. Finally hes in fuc%ing Racoon City...get the hell out before the walls go up and the nuke drops. Also the zombies arent the only threat he has to take down umbrella to survive. So step 1...information is key...if the system can hack then create a high level access ghot account and backdoor into umbrella systems...then ghost some umbrella safe houses, cloning facility, and munitions. Use the map function to tag all location of all resource sites (civilian and military) global if possible. Forge orders to preposition remote controlled tactical nukes in high population zones for when shit its the fan

Sorry but I am not summoning anything I dont have 100% control 24/7. Especially people clearly smarter than me

Honestly the flying wish was a waste. Could have asked for the Martian Manhunter abilities and gotten flight, as well as shape shifting, telepathy, super speed, super strength and eye beams for free. I would also swap out the speed reading for power nullification, absolute defense, compulsion or stealth. Dumbles and his ilk keep all the best stuff locked away so speed reading is useless if you don't have access. Finally, a blessing from the Goddess of Love is good if its good looks and a form of compulsion. Otherwise I would have to go with Ra or Hades for a death domain related blessing.

🙄Not sure why the MC is getting angry with the system about the cost of the summoning tickets. ROB clearly stated the conditions for the accumulation of points each life gives 0.5 pts. As well, the MC had the choice to negotiate/amend the wish before being reborn

🤔Not sure why the MC decided to fight the mountain tribes at this point when all he had to do was ambush Lysa's party and snipe the kid from a distance using his newly acquired Legolas Bow Skills

Yup last wish was a total waste. GOT verse comes with 3 big threats...1 magic (gods, dragons, white walkers, warlocks, etc), 2 people (greed backstabbers) and 3 environment (poor hygiene, weather, little technology, etc). Any wishes that dont at a minimum protect you from the big 3 is a waste.

Clearly the first summon character has to be a plumber. No way am I spending my life in GOT using pit latrines.

Like the novel but there is no way I would enter the Star Wars universe with the same level of tech as everyone else. I would definitely wish for tech at least 1000 generations ahead. To others my tech should be so advanced it seems like magic. Also I would definitely have to get gate or portal tech no way am I flying everywhere

Good read but my heart bleeds because of so much wasted potential

😔Well seems like this novel has literally jumped the shark. Not even Voldemort was this stupid and he had less than half his marbles.

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🤘rock on...love the story

That proves my point the MC at this point knows little about dumbledore save what he probably got from the novels and movies. Very few students get to interact with the Headmaster after all. From whats written thus far 2 starling conclusions can be made...dumbledore either knew Harry was being abused and did nothing, or sent Harry to be abused as part of some scheme. Worse the fact the he cared more sbout the optics than the abuse shows dumbles ruthlessness. That fact alone tells you this is not someone you should be mouthing off to without some security.

🤔Looks like the MC may have made his first mistake there is no benefit on keeping the family alive. Clearly he was thinking with his wang. The Queen is not stupid and she has some support of the English crown. If she suspects he will have to clean house in a hurry which may lead to other unforced errors. Besides who would want to sleep next to someone who they dusted almost their entire family.

[img=faceslap]this MC is stupid running his mouth off. He has no idea who dumbledore really is outside of the HP books and movies. With just a sleeping spell or potion dumbles can then toss him in a sack and order hagrid to dump him in the forbbiden forest as spider chow.

Honestly Dobby is the reason I would never bring an elf into my confidence or the core of my operations. Elves for all evidence to the contray can and will sabotage your endeavors if they dont agree with it or feel slighted. Better to have them do a few seemingly innocuous tasks without knowledge of the larger plan objectives or components

Another Harry Potter stalker. The MC's thoughts on the Chamber of Secrets makes no logical sense. Having established that this is real life and that things may be different or evolve differently than in the movies/books why his the MC wanting to rely on the same uncertain plot. There is no guarantee that Harry will kill the Snake. Why not just steal the book and put it on ice in a dark hole until he is ready. Honestly, if I was in the MC's position the only real option would be to avoid the golden trio and there mess as much as possible. Seek out how close the world is to the novel/movies. Make plans to gain every advantage I can get to secure my future life post voldy's demise. I am always amazed that in these fanfics the MC makes no prep for life after Voldy is defeated. What did the Ministry become less corrupt? Did the purebloods that survived become less bigots? Or did the wizarding world become less backwards.

So his first ritual is to obtain shark teeth. Why exactly🤨. I could have understood if he went for something useful like night vision, increased strenght n speed, underwater breathing, healing factor, or regeneration. 😒Well heres hoping the novel gets better