the initial setup reminded me of it instantly. still giving it a chance, cause it can break out multiple ways.

*Haven't you gotten tired or *Aren't you tired

*but she

*put her trust

*so she asked

As Eylons first book in his universe, you enter a realm of amazing writing and world building. He takes you in immense ups and downs. I personally have comments about dropping the book or finding him and torturing him if certain events happen. He keeps his promises, and you stay on the edge of your seat with his story.

As per Eylons books, he makes a very compelling and detailed story that brings you in and sweeps you away. You rise and fall with the characters to the point of wishing great harm to the author. This book from the same universe as his others is a great continuation of his strong writing. I greatly hope to see more of his stories.

*she pointed

I really hope you don't have her hurt either Ethan or the other girls to show she's better. I know that's not your style but style can change.

*as he fastened

I thought he turned 18 during the "campaign"

*Suddenly, he

*aid Lucius?

*she was

shouldn't this be Aurora?

* she felt

The only reason you aren't currently being hunted down to be burned at the stake, is due to your other book. We know your morals, and as long as they stay the same we'll be good. Also we know Alice and Henreitta are called for so don't think they can be used...

very well written experience. seeing this with the other girls would be nice but not necessary.

Shouldn't this be Elder Nova?

*stared