I repsect your opinion man but I don't think you read into the story far enough. You are right that this novel did not focus too much on the "shop system" but the story itself is not driven by the system, the system was just a mean for the character to improve, the story itself are driven by the characters. The MC here is also one of the most likeable MC I came around. He's ruthless and decisive, but also very kind and very humane. He doesn't go around face slapping people. I think if you read farther, you will know that it's a good story.

This reviewer did read the raw version but I dont think he read it far enough to give that final judgement. The novel is argubly one of the best or the best system novels out there. I think you are missing out my friend. There are a lot of trash novels out there but this novel is certainly and I mean certainly not one of them. You are gonna thank me later, trust me.