The_Preto
New brazilian fan of webnovels and fanfics that does not have a perfect english but try to comunicate at least
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The_Preto2mthCommentedBetter have a time skip and resume of week
Do you guys want a time skip. Because this is really slow paced and I think it would be better to have a time skip then continue this way. I'll also do a short explanation of what he does during that time skip.- The_Preto2mthCommentedCh 9 Aftermath
- The_Preto3mthCommentedCh 14 Farewell
- The_Preto3mthCommentedCh 28 Announcement
- The_Preto3mthReplied to mythoast
Some people are over reacting, so don't worry my man. Just continue with the good work and passion. ps: more Momoi x Tsuna and Tsuna with his family, pls
But, well, I might have gone a bit overboard, so thanks for the feedback! - The_Preto3mthReplied to Blasphemer_reader
But will have consequences, i really think that is possible and Tsuna really push the GoM beyond the Canon 🤷🏾♂️
Plus, the power dynamics with Tsuna's existence were different. I thought that, it made sense for Kise to enter the zone, especially since he had no injured this time and had shown big improvement. - The_Preto3mthReplied to Myzy
In high performance, people always strive beyond the limit, what matters is victory and that's what makes it so captivating to watch, it's no wonder that in rare cases some have "super focus"/zone and make history in the field (e.g.: MJ, Kobe, Felps, Uzain Bolt, CR7, Messi and so on), but the question is to see the consequences with Kise... I guess it will be a few weeks of neglect and maybe even physiotherapy perfomance the athltes
Hey, everyone! I noticed some concerns about Kise entering the zone in my story. - The_Preto3mthReplied to Vandalieu_Zakkart_0030Ch 220 Chapter 220: Kise's Dance in the Zone
- The_Preto3mthReplied to BunnyFFCh 220 Chapter 220: Kise's Dance in the Zone
- The_Preto4mthCommented
i really like their relationship, hope that both Coral anda Roy accept each other feelings/desires
Roy was pulled into the portal, and chuckles came from behind it. Roy grunted, and water splashed. Coral gasped. "Why do you have a dog in your hood, Roy?" - The_Preto5mthCommented
no harem sect for the win
So imma make a compromise, she gets the upgrade but Ash is still only going to date Maki. - The_Preto5mthReplied to Seiyu
Tsuna has the potential to open the "true"/team zone, but i'm really curious to see if his gate will be different
Aomine mumbled with a smile as he placed his hand on the doorknob. His muscles tensed as he pushed the door open with determination. - The_Preto6mthReplied to Sovannra_Seang
dates and romances are a little bit cliche, but this is also a good and confy aspect
This paragraph has been deleted. - The_Preto6mthCommented
i really curious to see what type of change Ash will bring in the world and characters, not only in power upgrade or event change, but mentality and relations dinamics, for example, Gojo not be alone and melancolic because of this, or Megumi be more open and creative etc etc
Ch 17 Just Trying To Have Fun - The_Preto6mthCommented
remind me of Haikyuu, soo it was a good reading and dynamic
[A/N—Tried to change the Volleyball matches writting style! Heavily focused on what happened in the game— probably not gonna write important matches this way but give me your thoughts?] - The_Preto8mthCommented
I think developing more the difference between "professions", advantages and disadvantages between each one would be interesting, but I know that would also come with time equal development in general (world, character etc). Otherwise, it's very interesting and has the future of picking up a protagonist in early youth, instead of an adult or late teens.
This book has been deleted. - The_Preto10mthCommentedCh 85 Chapter 82: Wait, what just happened?