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Nothing you need to fix it's a good story it's just a personal preference I like star wars and Jedi and I think for the most part if an ultra marine went to star wars it would pan out exactly like that.
although I would admit it seems accurate according to my understanding of 40k it's not really my thing.
it had a screen protector he was just very determined and they already paid for it. The screen wasn't the only thing damaged it won't charge any more, the speakers are shot, and a few other things. I am just waiting for the battery to die at this point.
I'm taking creative liberty and while I'm a fan 40k I don't have deep knowledge of the series lore
This all seems oddly familiar... do you also write the fanfic with a doppelganger instead of a vampire?
although I have held out hope for this to be picked up again I'm glad you are writing again
I'm the one writing it for fun but I don't really bother trying to fix it much.
it's not a logic problem it's a emotional problem although there was a low to non existent percent that it would happen it was still Batman that trained Nightwing and brought him into heroic lifestyle which is why he feels partly responsible
No mencionado todavía, peroxide estoy planeando en el futuro
Not yet actually while she is in love with Blackbolt she didn't marry until after they overthrown his deceitful brother. that said I still might need to add the tag for Peggy Carter, Susan Storm and possibly Harley depending on how I decided to go with the story.