thank you for coming back to do chapters once more, this is one of the fics I enjoy most.

order some sort of basket big enough with a rope swallow could hold. if not author could just say some pokemon are bigger some pokemon average sizes are pretty stupid

7/10 compared to a lot of novels it could be significantly worse. im not the type to nitpick so unfortunately I have nothing constructive to give. just happy as long as you keep releasing cause I love kingdom

take your time for quality, im just happy theres a kingdom fic

I'm interested to find out the rest of the team, we have fire/rock, ice/ground, ghost/fighting. so what we could use a good water, physhic and flying for exploration purposes? curious how your gonna move the story along, no point doing gyms if he's a champion level but I guess he can ask for spars or the leaders ask him

oi, no digging graves thats too respectful for them. dump their bodies in the forests for the beasts

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I read up to chapter 14 or so. so I'm not sure if it gets better, I may retry this and change my review in the future.My main issues is that it's too fast, the build times and resources gathering seems non existent. he seems to get a combat skill out of nowhere in chapter 12 without explanation. he just seems to be able to do everything and anything without weakness.My final issue is the details of the area like for example, the first village he comes across has no good description of its layout yet in a battle it seems to have walls that need seige towers to assault and a moat with only a population of 200.

Death to all the thalmor

all good, im looking forward to the changes and what you decide to do in the future

i decided to try this and i agree with the other comments that the introduction for the romance was a bit rushed. one thing i do hope is that legendaries are portrayed to actual forces of nature and to be feared if provoked (depending on which legendary) i will stick around though cause i am looking for a decently long pokemon fanfic (with romance) cause a lot get dropped cause the authors just vanish out of nowhere. you get my 3 stones for today

payed

thanks for the chap, I have played my toll of 3 stones

love the story so far and the details. keep it up, you get 2 of my 3 powerstones a day cause I love it so much

what about eiko. do we have poor crying slime again

well ive read this about 3 times now, im glad reading a pokemon fic like this that builds the scene around the mc. looking forward to all future chapters, the waiting sucks for the new ones but hey that happens with novels you enjoy

my god its been awhile since a novel like this made me sad. throw the author under a bus