Trobryan
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Fourth
thought one was intermediate and the dragon advanced when he first got them
repeat
this goes with my previous comment above
when did its personality change. flame was docile and ice was ferocious
darting
once again why repeat? repeat twice the put ... or just put after the first (he kept saying to himself)
why put in all this fill in? I've seen it multiple times
who's Wang Shang?
isn't that suppose to be the Zhou clan?
this was already said awhile back
Why do you say 4th level? originally they are 6th level. everyone else is 7th level.
I'd wish that words/names would be more consistent in this novel.