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why not ask the child for the magic book?
I feel like this dungeon is dumb.
is it a rat or ratman?
Just took a look at character build and skills. They look good. I hope you try not to make the necromancer a super overpowered character. When novels make their MC's to OP takes away from the novels. Hope you make a great novel. skim read to chapter 5.
missing some words in the earlier chapters, some name inconsistencies, but overall good spin on undead mage aspect.
second time I've seen the name switch to Ark
I call it average. It's about a guy who gets dealt a bad hand at the beginning. He is a reincarnated person, but his intelligence seems smart and rational at times, but then he does the exact opposite. He saves royalty but wants to distance himself from them. Then he goes and dates her, says he's a loner, then does the opposite. To me, the MC is a chump who has everything given to him. I don't like how oblivious people act to character flaws of the MC. Emperor's brother misjudged his talent grade. I'd want answers.
he is legendary, what does this mean?
I've only read to chapter 26, so I will only explain what bothers me. The problems I hate in novels are where they make the character so OP it makes the story useless. First would be 10x the stat points and skill points. He is a necromancer, but he distributed his stats about evenly. He can kill the dungeon mobs himself and be faster than his summons just by base stats. Skill points, he says he'll save them, then goes and spends them. Saying he'll earn more as he levels up. Second, he wants to be low-key, so he gets his level above average just before the entrance exam at level 10. During the exam, he decides he wants to be first. He raises skill ranks, and his level ends up at level 15 at the end of the exam. Not low-key. 3rd His talent would be exposed to the government after the entrance exam. How does a level 10 get to level 15 in eight hours? His wrist device exposes him. How would you explain his score since you could calculate what he killed to his level? The SS talented girl took 25 days to get to level 20. This kid took 8 hours to jump 5 levels. Red flags would be flying. I'd change his talent, I would give him like a 3x multiplier on summons and get him corpse explosion earlier so he can naturally enhance it without spending skills points. HP and MP potions can get him through dungeons without massive stats. He can earn money with his strength.
Undead farming: i summon a skeleton to farm. You already have the book out up to chapter 56. So why rename and start again? introduction is same person.