Is more a promo than a story, the start is interesting but later the chapters a head are with 1 question and then is only spam for other platform.

i like this fanfic there are not much The Irregular at Magic High School fics and the prota is too op even for the former prota.

the paper person jutsu is one of the undervalued jutsus in the anime and they didnt do justice in fight conan vs tobi/obito, now if you combine with a jutsu already broken and op, i think only the rinnegan with multiple dimension travel is the only 1 that can rank over that space jutsu

haters gonna hate, i like how the history is going a bit slow with the current arc but the rest is fine and i have a question now that the prota have 3 template from diferent universes he can get other template from the same universe or just the option to have the power of others in the same unirverse?

me gusto el prota(goku chibi) y sobre todo el hecho del que universo que se realiza es dxd asi que es harem 100% en ese universo ademas que casi todas las waifus(akeno es una mis preferencias) son buenas.

all win with that comment gabriel get a pure an lovely daugther and erik win a possible wife candidate and plus access to the best honey of the heaven(the 2 of them if you know what i mean :P ).

i dont think erik (the good doctor) will let issei die so i think is more viable a wake up call from erik and when issei is dying he will fixit like new.

he already have one that is fierce but its more sweet than honey, other that is clingy but can fck your brain out in more ways that you know, other that is very posesive that can kill when you sleep to no let others have his share, other that is inexpert but eager to learn so a other female with the pants in the house it will be funny mix.

she is the navigator like nami in one piece and is must in every ship.

is good one but he need to convert to devil for evil pieces to work and i think a sacred gear is better if the prota still want to be human.

a legendary pokemon, bloodline from naruto or a op devil fruit and from the movies a superman flying ability or xray view also can be mutant powers(good ones like logan regen factor or all good kinesis) and finally tecnology or knowledge from other universes that work in this universe.

he is too paranoic of ultron but with all he did in what if is a well deserved paranoia.

i think another fall and he didnt know until the girl eat him.

gundam approved

if you imply that the author is saying that william will marry all the 7 sins the numbers are wrong, because he already have 5 waifus(wendy, est, ash, sidone 1st sin and chiffon 2nd sin) and the author say he can only have 9 wives unless 1 of the other is a sin bearer and is hidding it or become 1 later.

aqui hay un error al inicio de la historia el prota nace en el ataque del kyubi entoces no puede haber diferencia de meses en la edad si acaso unas horas a 1 dia

well i dont like the 2nd half of bleach but is a good story and haters always gonna hate, so pls dont drop this art also like the idea of a poll for the type of weapon for the 1rst form and another for bankai and also i want to read the MC lovers get foodgasm like in the food war series and also the fox dominating the food industry with afrodisiac food and collapsing the world economy.(also the puddingasm who dosent love pudding that a world crime if you dont like it)