This should be made into a manga then made into an anime. not that it would be exactly like it played out in my head but my imagination was fully engaged while reading this and it's absolutely inspiring to read this about an MMORPG. If I was, to be honest, this could be better than any anime out right now, and depending on the art style it could get more people to work on immersive virtual reality who wouldn't want to play and be in factions.