DarkWizardZeref

Who is the single female lead. You should put that in description so people will be invested

So the first two chapters are a summary. He somehow knows he is homelanders son. There is a lot of holes in this fiction considering it is not even 10 chapters. Nothing has really happened and nothing makes this fiction impressive. Atleast it is not totally ai?

I don’t understand why you are getting annoyed. The Computer wrote this story. So it is the computer I am bashing :P

Only four chapters but they are long. You can see the difference and I think the author has done a wonderful job.

Seems well written. Not feelings yeah because nothing has happened that was not part of the plot will change review when more chapters come

So the author has not even corrected most of the sentences that is dangerous Don’t worry about the review I am just observant Like most AI stories this has no heart. It just sounds like a bunch of robots talkings Your dangerous your different The mc worried about nothing. How he can ruin everyone. Just little Robot things

Dark brown hair?

It got worse after he came back. The mc died and is now Naruto. Left to become stronger and hides like a coward. This fanfiction is like a train accident I cannot look away from. Horrifying

Big plot point is that he is not the heir. Should of happened as soon as he was born. He does not get to say no as baby but that was for plot reasons I guess. Nothing notable in this fanfiction.