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I would really be more than grateful for the help in editing. If you can do it, then go ahead. And if you are willing to also do it for current chapters and not only the previous ones, then just tell me how to contact you so we can agree.
Oh, it seems I mistaken in that, thanks for the correction.
Hahaha, no, in that part it describes the USA flag.
Hahaha, sorry for that. But, honestly, I don't think changing his personality. I think writing the core from the novel as comedy, so that personality from the mc adapt to this. I don't want to lie you, I don't believe that this one will have something like a develop of his character or things like that. I only hope this one to entertain and make fun to some people. Thanks for reading SES. I hope you can see the novel like I said and this make you fun a little. I only can ask you to see this one not so serious.
Hahaha, I would like to tell you that there is little left, but that depends on how each person considers it. But to give you an answer, it will probably be at the end of this month or the beginning of the next. Finishing this arc of Gaia, there is a small one from HOTD, and then Alex will go to another world after finishing making preparations and goodbyes. I think the following chapters are also interesting as I had fun writing them, so you just have to have a little patience. I hope you all like them! Thanks for reading SES and remember to support the novel on my patreon!!
Ir al mundo de Sekirei probablemente no, quizás como convocación. El más probable que vaya a Ikitousen es, aunque eso tendremos que verlo en el futuro. Samurai girl no lo eh considerado. Pero apenas estoy escribiendo el 4 mundo, así que solo queda esperar y ver que pasa también. Gracias por leer SES. recuerda apoyar la novela en p. atreon
Hola, si quieres puedes unirte a mi patreon y pedirme los cap en español allí. Pero debo decirte que si publico en español usaré el borrador que escribo en español, cuando lo traduzco a ingles, en ocasiones cambió algunas cosas, pero te puedo asegurar que por lo menos es más del 90 por ciento de la versión inglés. Espero verte en mi patreon pronto! Hasta luego y gracias amigo por leer SES!!
Hahaha, bueno solo puedo decir que cada quien tienes gustos diferentes. Espero que si hago una novela te guste mas. Sobre qué la novela está llena de relleno, a mi parecer no lo es. En hots, cada parte creo que fue necesaria. Sobre qué el mc no avanza, ciertamente avanza lento, pero ya que espero hacer esta novela un poco larga, entonces el desarrollo será lento. De qué las chicas se encariñan rápidamente del mc también es verdad. Pero yo creo que la mayoría de los harem son así. Sobre qué el mc es un estereotipo pervtido tampoco le veo nada de malo. A cada quien le gustan cosas diferentes. También ciertamente que la personalidad de algunas chicas las cambie. Debido a que algunas tenían personalidades simalares, entonces tuve que cambiarla. O también puede ser que a mi me pareció que ella era así en el animé, pero a otras personas le pareció diferente. Por último, lo de r18, ciertamente la novela no tiene mucho al principio pero ya que tendría, tenía que ponerlo o la página podría borrarla. De todos modos te agradezco por tomarte tu tiempo y leer SES. Espero que si hago otra novela esta te agrade más.
Hello, sorry, the truth is that I did not understand very well what you wanted to say since you made it quite complicated, but I think you misinterpreted things a bit. I'm going to try to explain things to you as I wanted you to see them. First, the skill you mention does not make Mc 10 times stronger than other people, what it does is make Mc develop 10 times faster. On the other hand the levels is like the strength or physical state of the person, this depends not only on the skills but also on the effort of the persons to strengthen themselves, the energy of the environment, or the energy they absorb when killing other things. So Soichiro who was close to level 40 at the time, it could be interpreted that this was due to his training throughout his years. As for the Mc, since he has just recreated his body, it could be said that he had just been born and not that he had been Nerfied (I don't remember if the person who helped me edit putting something about that they were going to be nerfed in the first chapters). About that, when skills were said to be nerfed, it was the skills and not the Mc level. (The reason why I had to nerf the skills is explained later.) I hope I have been able to explain how things were about that in the way I see it and so that you can enjoy the story. Thanks for reading SES !!
Hahaha, OK. Anyway, thanks for reading SES. See ya.
Hahaha, well yeah, I took various thing that liked me from some novel, but in my defense, this a fanfic, not a original novel. Only can invite you to reading my novel and look if you liked it. I think that about the chapter 20 or 30 this one begins to forms is own history. Hahaha if you decide to continue reading, then I hope that at least find it interesting. If not, thanks for take you time to read one chapter.