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Osypak

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  • Osypak
    Osypak1yr
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    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)
    Anime & Comics · SlimeSage
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    It's useless against dumbles

    'If someone use Legilimency on me, I just have to think of Boku no Pico.' Joked Magnus, but he still kept this tactic as a viable counterattack.
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    HP: Eagle Soars
    Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented
    (A/N: Don't know the proper sound fx for helicopter noises, sorry.)
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    I'm Otsutsuki Toneri
    Anime & Comics · Vennyon
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    You could just included this in your paragraph but you make it author note.

    Author's Note [The training didn't start until two months later because Zick had said Duncan's body hadn't grown enough to do any practical exercises yet].
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    Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)
    TV · Duncan_Randar
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Well. Look like Neo finally learn a thing from agent Smith

    They're like clone of John Wick!
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    How to be O.P.
    Others · Nakirii_
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented
    "Something?" Xytan nodded.
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    Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System
    Anime & Comics · ForceFromBeyond
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Replied to FadeKnight

    Correction 50

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    Invincible's Kryptonian Twin
    TV · Enigma_Green
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Replied to Defenestration_69

    Angel beats, if I'm not wrong

    ' He compressed the flames at a single point being his finger and launched it. ' Todoroki thought.
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    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    It's not gonna work if we just force and demand more chapter from you. You had your own life and stuff you're busy with, so just update whenever you can and rest if you tired.

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    KB/NA
    Anime & Comics · Blac_Hurb
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Man. It's great story but the way you wrote it, I'm sorry to say but it's terrible. It's readable but you don't use punctuation enough to space your sentence that it make ao confusing and annoying to read

    Ch 4 CHAPTER 4 ROGER PIRATES AND THE 5 EMPERORS
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    ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND
    Anime & Comics · godlyarrogantz_305
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Danger noods~

    I was going to try and tame a Mamushi. A Mamushi is an extremely venomous pit viper, and, according to the "internet", the most venomous snake in Japan. (There's another really venomous one that it's venom is compared to, the Okinawan Nabu)
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    The Bone Hero, Jokara
    Anime & Comics · Wilna_Kapp
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Could he just rip that door cell or teleport inside?

    Ch 20 Jailbreak Part-2
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    MHA : True Power of Telekinesis
    Anime & Comics · Omega200
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Story is great so far but your character make this story so annoying. A 40 yrs old man with no common sense with childish temper tantrum and so much whining.

    Ch 4 Zombie!!!
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    One Piece: The Hundreds Swords Pirate
    Anime & Comics · Kouhaii
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Replied to Kouhaii

    And please don't make him too dumd that he not recognize what common sense is

    Ch 1 Long talk, with some sake
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    One Piece: The Hundreds Swords Pirate
    Anime & Comics · Kouhaii
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    What?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 : Life is Good
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    MHA: A Cat's Story
    Anime & Comics · WolfStar14
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    My brain hurt read this. Repetitive sentences with similar meaning in one paragraph.

    Quinn raised his hand with his fake wand in his grasp. The wand tip glowed as he held the fake wand over his head. He waited in silence as the fake wand tip glowed and gazed around to look for something noticeable.
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Unnecessary chapter.

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    MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Gonshido
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    If they killed all of the people in that village. What make mc so special that they want him alive?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    The Phoenix of Fairytail
    Anime & Comics · LonelyTurkey
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    Why need so much for seeds. You could just planted some and recycle the harvest for seeds. I mean, even with that much seeds, it can't grow in instant so it's just waste of money

    "Besides that, I would also like to purchase a convoy of food. I need 100 million Beri worth of Lettuce Seeds, 100 Million Beri worth of Apple Seeds, 100 Million Beri worth of Pumpkin Seeds, and finally I need 200 Million Beri worth of mixed foods, just put what you think is the most well balanced and nutritious, I trust that this can be done?" Arch asked, he thought this might be a bit demanding but the Administrator simply chuckled.
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    One Piece: The Strongest Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Futility
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  • Osypak
    Osypak2yr
    Commented

    The first chapter is so good that with no hesitant i added it to my library but when you go with this princess love on first sight thing, the development became go downhill real fast it's not even funny.

    Ch 14 14. Great Escape!
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    One Piece: Road To Admiral
    Anime & Comics · Alekzi
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