Fearmongering

First and foremost, thank you for the reply. I do appreciate the heartfelt advice and thank you for giving my story a chance. Truth be told, I did forget to upload the rest of the written chapters... Right now, about 10 chapters have been written, I usually just publish them on RR, since the story is a better fit there. I just published 5 here, since the first version of this story started on Webnovel itself. I am constantly tweaking and rewriting to give this the quality I think it does deserve. Progress is therefore slow. I am still under the impression that my style of writing is not a great fit for this website, since it is not as clear and direct as many people would like it to be. All that being said, thank you for the review and I hope the reading experience was to your liking!

The story seems interesting so far, I do not know what it is, but it feels like this story hits all in the right spots. I just can tell that the MC is someone that will live in my head for quite some time. I really do look forward to the world that the author will craft here. It really has the potential to be a really great story

I really enjoyed the story so far, I really can not find any complain about the story. The character are lifelike, the grammar is nothing to scoff at. Author, I really like your story, so make sure you keep on making the story even more awesome.

Great novel, the first chapter pulled me in, would recommend to fantasy lovers of all kinds, the main character is cool, and the world building is decent.

thats one of the problems old Born and Torn has sadly

Nope he is not, I think

What a promising start to a novel, I can not help but wonder how the story will develop with a system. I really liked the characters and the way the opening was used to establish the setting. If you are looking for a good read, this novel looks promising.

I really like the world-building here. The premise of this book harbours a lot of potential. The characters, despite seeing so little of them, seem almost too real. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for writing this great story author!

The beginning was unexpectedly gripping. I can not help but wonder how great this story will become in the future if it is already this fun at just 3 chapters in. Looking forward to reading more in the future.

Great read, with deep characters and an interesting premise. I can not wait to see how it will develop. I love the worldbuilding and the powers shown so far. Keep it up author!