everything is excellent, exceptional story line, back ground has a lot details. good plotline. wish it was a little cheaper through. mmm. overall very good.
so far the book is awesome, just need to update more. plotline and story background are all good. characters are awesome, details are AMAZING!!! BUT NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!! getting anty waiting for new ones.
plotline is awesome, I feel sad though because it looks like the little one will be taken advantage of by those brothers. i hope the plotline doesn't have any rape involved in it. ship the god and little one. the best would be to have them marry each other and get her away from her foolish family.