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breakerrxx1yrCommentedBro have you seen a girl on her period lol, its not like this. At this point its just her personality issue
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I wonder if there will be more variety in terms if fenale personality. So far they all seem pretty much the same
He had enough of being around overly energetic people after spending two weeks with the Silvercolts. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
I get this is for comedic purposes but Thats actually rlly messed up. if it were a girl in that situation it wouldnt be seen as funny and automatically pointed out as sexual harassment. Interesting how gender Biases work
However, Owen claimed that he had only done it to heal him… - breakerrxx1yrCommented
Ew
Moreover… Her new little brother was hot as hell! - breakerrxx1yrCommented
Thats pretty awkward and insensitive forcing a kid to call you mom when they dont feel comfortable to
"Yes… M-Mother?" - breakerrxx1yrCommented
They could always Do a background check on him...
"My name is Arvell Silvanus. I was raised in Rimel village, a small village located a little farther down south from Talion." - breakerrxx1yrCommented
It would be bE nice if arvells character develops and he becomes more empathetic. Having an empathetic personality Towards the weak would make him more charisMatic and i feel like it would rlly match his looks/charm
The female knight carried the woman on her back, and they headed back to the group. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
Good man
'People like him are quite rare. People who don't shift the blame but instead take it head-on. Most nobles in this situation would blame someone else, probably their underlings or their rivals, but no, the knight commander took on all of the blame,' Arvell admired. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
Good man
Even if he didn't want to throw away his life on a fruitless endeavour to 'rescue' the girls, he still did feel empathy for them. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
............. imagine Harry Potter in the second move, thats hOw young and small he is
They might be 6 years older than him… but age was just a number, right? - breakerrxx1yrCommented
So skeletons use sight and not sense Or mana sense? But they have no eyeballs :O
The bird-like beast like the skeletons didn't seem to be disoriented despite being in pitch-black darkness. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
arvell is a royal, how was he not able to notice that??
'Like he's from a noble house!' - breakerrxx1yrCommented
wouldn't speeding up time for him age himself? because it's not just simple acceleration of speed
This would effectively work to slow down time for everyone else while speeding up the flow of time for himself. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
WhereS the FBI
If there were any women around to see this they would have fallen for him on the spot, luckily for Arvell, there weren't. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
Just as a suggestion, Many of the paragraphs are very reptitive in terms of content. Same stuff just said in dIfferent ways. can prob cut back on that as it takes away from the story especially when theres already an information dump
Since he didn't have any mana, he could not become a mage; Arvell's natural strength and speed are simply no match compared to those who have become Arcane Warriors. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
For a 13 year old hes taking this, strangely, very well and hes not even reincarnated or transmigrated
However, there was no merit in crying over spilt milk. - breakerrxx1yrCommented
why bother telling his name when he's literally gonna kill them all chuuniybou syndrome haha
"Azriel Ruinous."