PerseusMikaelson

If the country is officially called the Australian Principality then shouldn't Arthur's title be 'Prince'? Instead it's 'Duke' of Australia then shouldn't the name of the country be the Australian Dukedom or the Duchy of Australia?

8th represents that he's number 8 in terms of skill and power among all human nen masters in the world.

KeBin

How spineless, just after that grand vow of protecting his deceased aunt's daughter he didn't even have the courage to speak a single syllable, all the while whining about how no one asked for his opinion which is perfectly normal since adults tend to do that to kids, if you wish to be heard as a child you have to speak up even when not asked anything, I suppose it can't be helped since he's an actual "real" child not some transmigrator with an entire past life's adult experience, expecting too much from a kid was my mistake, it's just the fact that the mighty Targaryen Dynasty with their dragons at the height of it's power has to marry off their daughters against their consent to old widowed men with children and even then after they die their children with Targaryen bloodline that has dragon taming capacity can't be taken back, I don't know if what you have written is completely canon or some creative liberties have been taken but I have to say this whole chapter just made this entire dynasty along with your main character look utterly pathetic, your grammar and writing style are pretty good though it's just that the story so far has left a real bad taste in my mouth so I will be leaving, good luck for your future writing endeavours I believe you can write something great, it's just that the content is not to my tastes.

It's a historical fiction novel what else did you expect? half the charm of this genre is learning new facts about civilizations of old, if you feel that it's a problem then it's only going to get harder to read for you as we go on.

The name of the country can be the Kingdom of Avalon, while the name of the capital can be the City of Camelot.