Happy birthday little brother, I hope you enjoy it. there I leave you my stones

Amazing what you are doing, I discovered the game thanks to this story. I really liked the story of the game and I find these new twists very interesting, I hope you continue with the excellent work, congratulations to the author.

Very good fan-fic, the author has an incredible imagination, good use of the songs, the theme and the plot, I hope you continue it and you can carry it out. super recommended hope you give it a try

Excellent chapter and the interactions that the characters had was very interesting. congratulations on a good job

very entertaining, if you like stories of personal growth with a touch of fantasy is your story, the development of the person and its base story encourages you to continue reading

very good fan-fiction, really very entertaining enough to read a while and distract you, it does not fail to explain the mission of the protagonist and to make it grow in the way that the author wishes, as the author himself exposes in the beginning is a growth sped up and no romance or raunchy scenes (if that's what you're looking for, it's not for you) so I really suggest it