original link pls?

That is not a problem at all. While I love your fic. You have your own Life to live, and by your constant updates a few days are something I and your other readers can accept easily enough I hope.

I have seen this fic before on uukanshu or imiaobige. Therefore it is MTL. But the fic itself is not goog either way.

Solo Leveling would be a good choice

You should change that with the Baryon Mode. Not everyone has watched Boruto and knows what you mean. I for one have not watched it and have just heard about it once or twice.

Is this a Cultivation Novel? Chakra was good enough explained in the Original Story. All are born with Chakra and trough training one learns to control and increase it.

Please correct me if I am Wrong. But by Esper abilities you will automatically have a mind to keep up with it an use all calculations that you need. So to just have the ability makes you already capable of said calculations.

You said you are translating it. Can you tell me where i can find the original story?

Why all those different powers and skills? In Naruto with Ulqiuorras Powers is already strong enough even more so if you had given him a System that could upgrade said abilities. Infinite Energy is one thing because having it and using it in just one Attack are two different things. I will stop reading here as it is not something I enjoy. But good work either way. And I hope others enjoy it more than I

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I agree. The Story is good the way it is. The quality is not decreasing either. I eagerly await the next chapters.

If hes a Warlock then you should first send him to the World of Warlock of the Magus World

I really like your fic. It is somewhat repetitive that such fics mot of the time begin in Against the Gods but it could be worse. If you make another Fic it would be cool if your Character first goes do Desolte Era or Wu Dong Qian Kun. There are not really any fics featuring them. At least not in the Englisch Language.

I really do not like how whipped he is.

Where art thou? We need updates. You cant leave us hanging like this.

I have to say Alice annoys me in your fic to no end.

They are right. I am gone too. How annoying

Rias older Twin Brother with the Power of Destruction is better or make him an actual Angel on Heavens side. There are very few fics like that.

I would like to ask if there are plans to continue the story? I would welcome an answer to said question. eXceZz