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    CodeBeholder1yr
    Commented

    really not a fan of chaos mark affecting his mind and the whole combat sequence seemed very contrived

    Ch 53 CHAPTER 53(Chaos)
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    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics ¡ keanu_eugene
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    CodeBeholder2yr
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    Some harem novels are just super cringe in how the MC treats women and many of the harem members are forgotten and have little purpose after their "initiation" but what I love about this is that they each play a part in the story, and the MC does make time for each of them.

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    Against Heaven's Will
    Eastern ¡ Piokilek
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    Sorry to hear that! Merry Christmas!!

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    God succession system
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to Larslolxz

    I agree, not only that but regardless of her cultivation level, she still really only has the mentality of an 8 year old... even if she is somewhat tenacious and courageous I feel it is very unrealistic that her 8 year old mind could survive the 99 samsara thing. That said, the main I stopped is because it was then revealed that Ning Shen was to be the male romance... Which is just gross, the first thing he says when he sees an 8 year old girl is "I must make her my wife" ?!?! That is a barely acceptable train of thought to have towards a grown woman. It sent me nothing but really creepy vibes... and makes me second guess my choices for reading any of the authors other works.

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    Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
    Fantasy ¡ invayne
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    lol these comments.. I don't care if it's yuri as long as it's not this ****er ning shen

    Ch 63 The Wang Clan Receives A Visitor
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    Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
    Fantasy ¡ invayne
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    you mean to tell me that there is no technique to allow her body to change to an ***** one? I can major shenanigans, it's cute that she starts as an OP loli... but the contrivance of forcing her to remain as one is stupid

    Ch 29 Six Months And Return Part One
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    Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
    Fantasy ¡ invayne
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    the concept that the heavens would recognize and punish a vow made by a ,6 year old kid, specifically one that didn't know what said vow meant, is a pretty lame plot device... especially since it's then hanging over her shoulders for the rest of her immortal life.

    Ch 10 A Vow To The Heavens
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    Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
    Fantasy ¡ invayne
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    CodeBeholder3yr
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    I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.

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    New World New Life
    Fantasy ¡ ValestriaMoon
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    the fact that he cannot travel with his wives to the next world or even access avalon is stupid... it signals the worst sort of harem novel, the one where older wives that were acquired lose screen time and are no longer relevant to the story... *sigh* it was bad enough in one piece where we hardly heard from them

    Ch 70 Prologue
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    Ascension or journey from world to world
    Anime & Comics ¡ PerfyX
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    thanks!

    Ch 331 The End of Fairy Tale
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    God succession system
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    yea, I'm really sad because I was mostly enjoying this, but this is a drop from me

    Ch 83 Doctor and the Garlic Dryad
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    Evil Goddess System
    Fantasy ¡ Tilted_Axis
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to Aht

    Who's to say the MC even needs to go from "earth" to the isekai'd world of Yggdrasil? Perhaps he bypasses it entirely and never was a game character to being with... also please please minimize the interactions with Momonga, but I'm all for making the Overlord arc longer, I love that world and (most) of the characters

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    Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to Konrad_The_Fourth

    agreed, momonga is a tool... his NPCs are cool though if you wanna steal them from him

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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to Amataratsul

    I'd rather it be as AU / separate from the og plot as possible, while still re-using some of the characters

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    Rebirth : Traversing the Myriad Planes
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    **** **** cleo already

    Ch 51 Letting a wolf near his daughter
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    The Spider Queen
    Sci-fi ¡ HopelesslyRomantic
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to HopelesslyRomantic

    yea, I don't mind cleo per se.... but she forced herself on the MC... which isn't kosher, also... the MC needs to have more presence there, she was way to passive even if she's never been in a relationship she wouldn't NOT react / defend herself against those actions, it just seemed super forced

    Ch 48 I will never associate with this girl again!
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    The Spider Queen
    Sci-fi ¡ HopelesslyRomantic
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Replied to Mr_Fuzzknuckle

    agreed, %100 I dislike the characterization of the princess entirely

    Ch 48 I will never associate with this girl again!
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    The Spider Queen
    Sci-fi ¡ HopelesslyRomantic
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    booo

    Ch 48 I will never associate with this girl again!
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    The Spider Queen
    Sci-fi ¡ HopelesslyRomantic
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    noooo, this is honestly the best HP fanfic I've read... I'll be sad to see it dropped 😞

    Ch 94 The long awaited... Hiatus
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    Stuffed into Potter
    Book&Literature ¡ KasiCair
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    CodeBeholder3yr
    Commented

    why would the mc just monologue about his abilities in front of everyone? seems super out of character

    Ch 175 Chapter 175 : Freya's Family Demise...
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    Dungeon System Within DanMachi
    Anime & Comics ¡ Seion
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