How is this still highly ratet. I came back to check if the translation got any better. It Didn't. And its not even difficult things. Why is the Translator calling Beastman/demihumans Orcs? Demihumans and Beastmen are an extremely common tropes in all fantasy media. The only thing i can imagine is that its translated by a native Chinese speaker who doesn't understand that "shouren" has multiple translations in English but reading the story one should have realized that Orc is not the correct translation in this case. Ignoring the miss assignments of sfx there are also a lot of other issues. Massive Grammar issues with unfinished sentences, direct translations of Chinese idioms without explanation, overuse of the word "asshole" and extreme simplification of common speech pattern make this comic basically unreadable. The Art and the story are good but the translation is almost the worst i have ever read. And I'm being forgiving here as i understand enough Chinese to at least understand that the mistakes are understandable if you are dealing with a lazy und not well read translator.

So year last Chapter i commentet on "White" actualy being the dessert. It still tracks. the Dessert refined big white, little white and the white horse and took the form of a unified white.

The Truth behind "White" is probably that the Original "White" was the Dessert. His Path to immortality was that of entropy and the endlessly shifting sands. When "White" became the wielder of the will he was forced to splitt defining features of himself of so to create the lord of the neatherworld. Chosing the Jung man in Green (his least favorite aspect). When vacating the Will he then split of another aspect to survive, chosing "little white" (his favorite aspect) leaving only the "White Horse" to perisch as the will.

The 10th famile is already the vanpired worst fear. a Damphir they cant hide from armed with a Bloodfairy blade. Fex who figures out how to call out his bloodkristal wapon, a poinson user able to degenerate them to bloodsuckers, aso

So at least the autor is aware of the infodump. please try to integrate them naturaly. like an elder who explains part of it at the test or a conversation about the topic with friends.

this MC is so freaking dumb. he found the unterground caverns but no he wants to land direktly in a tresure house.

so yeah. pyramid seems to be the name of what was called the war tower in earlier chapters?

this auto translator is pissing me of more and more. now wisdom tower was translated as pyramid........ get a fucking englisch editor. this is driving everyone here mad.

again name mixing sickness

the autors nameswitching sickness is flairing up again.

especialy in the current situation it would be poinant for the mc to go all out to prevent as much death as posible but noooooooo, he wants to draw out the battle to have his fun... facepalm.

its definetly the twins.

didnt the author say ashlin liked trinking but got drunk realy fast?

realy how bad is autor at math? 2 sliver plus 5 beyong white grim is 7 not 8.

also am i wrong to think that the autor took ellens name from Ellen Degeneres? because since the autor is alway light on discribing what the caracters look like (to the point that we dont even know there ethnicities or hair color) thats what i imagine ellen to looks like.

it realy gets confusing. so far we had Rachel=Sahra, Rachel = Ellen, Rachel=Rayna (btw autor that how Rayna is spelled), Ben= Ritchi. At least there is no people miscount anymore like during the first team training arc. It was especialy irritating when he confused rachel and sahra. As Sahra and Rachel are sisters.

i think, and this is only a guess, this is because the Grimm are actualy humans mutated by the dark energy. (it mutates monster to be bipedal, why shoudnt it mutate kidnapped humans and there of spring to be monstrous.) and the white fox is miachels kidnapped friend.

what confuses me every time is that autor talks as if they are 6 people while they are seven. team leader, Sopia and rayna, Emma and Ben, Ritchy, and michael.

The story is very entertaining, even if it is very combat havy. The Editing is a compleate mess the first 40 or so chapters and only gets a little better after that. The main caracter has some issues conserning development a.i. he das not developed in the first 150 chapter, this however is balanced by the MCs monster and several side characters. Powercreep is an issue in the form of level-up on demand so that the autor is cuntiuesly introducing new levels and aspects of those level to the point that many are not actualy explained.

obvious Warcraft reference is obvious