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1yrCommentedCh 98 Consistent- 1yrCommented"Then who –" She paused, head slowly turning to look down at me. "Wilhelm, did you fuck your grandmother."
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didn't really have a problem but it was off character but like you said learning experience but still I'm all for her
Alright, i'm not blind or ignoring the criticism and feed back, nor am I going to shy away from it. First off, I'm not going to apologize for Venelana being in the harem, but I will apologize for how I went about it. I can accept that i made an oopsie in how i decided to add her. I could explain my mindset, give my reasoning, but at the end of the day, it just fell flat and came off as out of character for him. I get it, and I apologize. My kneejerk reaction was to rewrite a bunch of things, but cooler heads prevailed after the initial reaction. So here's where we're at, i'm going to leave it and treat it as a learning experience as new writer. I made a mistake, i'm sorry, I won't do it again in the future. It's not the first time i've made a mistake, nor is it going to be the last, but I'm happy that I don't keep on making the same mistakes as I go. - 1yrPosted
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oi don't disrespect the boomerang
The young man snorted in disdain before thinking, 'That pipsqueak is just annoying, much like that damn woman Katara and her whiny ass brother, Sokka.' - 1yrCommented
thank you, you as well
(E/D: That's huge. Huge timeskip. But understandable. Have a Great day.) - 1yrCommented
lolololol
So Yoruichi is also here. I doubt it's just a random black cat that I found on my drunk adventure. I can only hope that I didn't turn into Shane Dawson at night, or else I won't be able to look at myself in the mirror anymore. - 1yrCommented
read my gf this comment she said oof then went back to her tiktok
It's okay though, in the end, I don't blame y'all. I blame TikTok that's turning you into mush-brained dopamine junkies with 15-second attention spans who only enjoy fast-paced garbage. - 1yrCommented
symbiote wingman
mate her too. If the Gwen wouldn't listen to her she could only make more reasonable suggestions. - 1yrPosted
I have read many one piece fn's and I'm proud to proclaim that this is my all time favorite he manages to capture the true spirit of one piece while also giving his original spin he isn't afraid to push boundaries in the story at times I honestly felt like I was reading a professional writers work so kudos to you author I await the end of this book and look forward to your next one
- 1yrCommented"Guahahaha!!! Praise me, mortals!!!" Cavendish, who was in T-pose, began to shine in bright white light.
- 1yrCommentedZoro grinned and pointed a thumb towards himself, "Heh, just trust in me Luffy. Didn't we get to the Orange town just fine last time?"
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says it's BS but the math checks out
Ughh, my head hurts writing this. Of course, most of this is BS but I hope I clarified some confusions here. - 1yrReplied to Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
good morning
''Did I somehow miss something?''detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - 1yrCommented(A/N: I would appreciate if ya'll pointed out some grammar mistakes cuz my brain does monkey stuff sometimes...)
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this Naruto is the highest functioning schizo I've ever seen
"The seal that you used on Danzo, previously it took you more than a month to create completely. Your current target is to decrease the time needed to create such a seal to less than a week. Such a complex seal requires immense precision and control. If you are able to create that seal in less than a week, you will have developed your control and skills to a higher level." That was what Hiroki said to Naruto before playing ping pong with Ashura inside his head. - 1yrReplied to Zailo95
me when for a split second thought you were talking about me
Lin Fan felt that as a China, he was superior to Japan, especially seeing these two maids bowing their heads in front of him, this strengthened his ego even more. - 1yrCommentedI'm so pissed, remember that rant that I just gave? Yeah the second I only used a free SQ roll I was able to get her, Moon Cancer Kiara….