no problem, i have read a lot fan fic about hunter exam. and most of the fanfic got dropped after 4rd exam. i hope you can keep continue the story and finish it. thx for the chapter

please dont drop this story. i like the story so far. i like how MC playing with girls innocent. please update!!! i need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]

well i think you need to stick with the story so far about slice of live romance. dont fokus about future harem and dont put in fantasy story or powerful woman in the harem. just make it like normal life. if he get power or sistem or become non human the story will get more complicated. it will make the story harder for you to write. thank for the the good story so far. keep the hard work[img=recommend]

please make the devil fruit have unique power. that make your fan fic different than the other fan fic. thank for the chapter

it still the same

thank for the chapter. what year when goku come to earth? is it still far?

where the chapter?

kwkwkwkwk it was really funny. thanks for the chapter

the chapter is not complete bro! please fix it. thx

well, how about make MC more smart. he dont need to help fisher tiger to escape because he can do it alone. make boa 3 sister fall in love with him because his kind to them. well they are still kid when they got captured so it not to hard to there trust.

thank for the chapter! i want to know where is mira and her granma go? i miss her. can you make ryuu playing with his sister more? hehehe...

please update his hatsu and ability to

well remembering it was his first time he should act more innocent there to build more tension, and she will teaching him about the pleasure ***. thanks for the new chapter

can you put status of his spirit bone to, i remember he have spirit bone in his head you didn't elaborated it fuction yet. and his 3rb spirit ring skill please put the explaination in the status to. thanks for the chapter.

so the wish with nanika is to steal from the auction or the empire, nice plan he got there. thx for the chapter!

is it posible for him to use modern item like kamera or satelite to see where he want to teleport??? he just need to see the place right!? it dosent mean he need to go there before to that place to teleport right??? if it posible it really convenient for him to go anywhere in the world, couse HxH is kind of modern world like hunter site or tsubome camera monocle glasses can send video live sreamming and with nen anything is posible.

great expleination there.

thx for the new chapter, make the MC more pervert and dominan when he handling the woman please. also keep tracking the point system he got after the time skip to, and what item being selled in system shop.

please dont drop it, i like the story so far. but there is no ch. R-18 yet, so i hope you make it. like the MC with his slave or any other woman, just make the MC playing punisment game, shower together, some touching while sleeping together. just make some innocent move please.