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4. The Guild (suggested by reader donstare WN)- dontstare1yrCommented
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21. C.A.P.E. - Coalition Against Powered Entities (suggested by me) - dontstare1yrCommented
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23. The Inquisition (suggested by reader poposwitch on WN) - dontstare1yrCommented
The Guild (generic group) The Order (cause they want to bring order to the world) The God Slayers (they be slaying the supes) Humanity (the only real humans. Supes are freaks of nature.) Just some I think would be cool
Additionally, if you guys have any recommendations for an organisation name, let me know, and I might pick it as I'm currently drawing a blank. - dontstare1yrCommented
Love the side chapters as I feel like it builds the world. However, I won’t lie that I‘m happy to get into the action.
Hi all, I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Don't worry, If you aren't a fan of my side chapters, you'll be happy to know the next few will be following Soldier Boy and his plan to take back everything he is owed. - dontstare1yrCommented
Kinky, too bad you don’t write the naughty scenes :(
"Now, where did we leave off?" Mr M said with a smirk towards the now nude servants, who giggled as they removed his shirt. - dontstare1yrCommented
He’s going to be surprised at how different the MC is.
"No, Francis. I have studied him more than any other man alive, and I can tell you one thing, he is not the type of man to lay low. He has most likely already left for America. Knowing him, he will soon show himself dramatically and violently," Mr M replied, his eyes betraying that his mind was transported to a different time, he quickly shook his head, and a smile graced his lips. "Do not worry. He is a relic of a bygone era. No matter his strength, he will not survive the difficulties this century poses, and that will be our advantage." - dontstare1yrCommented
I like this V-tech angle. Is this how they are going to take down the Freaks?
He was fortunately left clean and uninjured as he had quickly activated a function on his cane that produced a circular force field around him. - dontstare1yrCommented
The goreeeeeee, yesssss
"I guess I was wron.." Mr M began saying before Ana's body suddenly swelled and exploded all over the room, killing the two soldiers that had picked up her body and covering everyone except Mr M in guts, blood and pieces of metal. - dontstare1yrCommented
Yep I’m 100% certain now. I defo know who Mr M is. Nice one author!!
"Fuck!! That idiot!! I told him to increase security on that compound. That racist piece of shit probably killed Victor. I know he was involved in experimenting on him in the past. It's why I liked the fucker so much. That bastard Chemenko probably used the funds I gave him for some other bullshit," Mr M mumbled to himself before looking at Andrei sternly. "Get Chemenko on the line now and tell him I know and will deal with him later. Take everything here and make sure there are no traces of Victor's work. We have to assume the worst and act accordingly." - dontstare1yrCommented
I think I know who Mr M is. You are giving some heavy hints so im sure im right.
"Just a little longer, and then we will be reunited," Mr M whispered whilst lost in memories of the past. Unable to control himself, he opened an unbreakable V-tech locket and let a single tear run down his face as he looked down at the photo of a smiling young boy devouring a giant ice cream cone. - dontstare1yrCommentedCh 18 Mr M: Third Person POV
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You got me invested in this short story 😂
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