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Maxime

Maxime

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This deity doesn't concern himself with mortal matters.

2018-03-12 JoinedNetherlands
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    This is a pretty nice novel to read, but there are a few issues with it. First thing is the writing quality. It's a lot better than most of the trash I usually come across on this site, but it's not of the quality I thought it would be after seeing the other reviews. Sure, the grammar is good. Spelling on the other hand, is quite mediocre. One mistake that especially bothered me is that the term 'Awaken' is being used in the same way as 'Awakeners' or 'Awakened' 'Awaken' is a verb, not a noun. There are other similar mistakes, but they are small in comparison. Furthermore, this novel lacks diversity and complexity with words and sentence structures, But for a novel on this site, I don't even expect that; it's do-able for a lazy read World background is vague but shows mildly interesting developments and general character design shows some minor improvement in later chapters. Not perfect, but not bad either. Stability of updates is excellent with only a few mishaps here and there. All in all, this is a decent novel on this site.

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