Oh my God! He killed Mahoraga!

Now Nicholas must summon the granny as a servant.

Wait where’s the final scene, where the MC and Toretto remade the famous scene from fast and furious where the two nod at each other in their respective cars ?

Depends on what you want. Do you think he already has what's necessary (his basic build) to start the story? then do a time skip. If you think there is still something needed then do a few chapters before the Exams. But make it only 3 chap max, frankly having him interact with too much characters or train too much before the exams will kinda ruin the flow of the story later on, since you will already told many things before and also if Izuku gains too much skill with training chapters it may make him too strong for the start of the story. Waiting for the next chapter :)

No there is only one year difference between classes, they don’t come at the start of the first year but at the middle of it of others high school’s calendar, the condition to be part of hope academy is to already have attended another high school. So the school year inside hope academy starts and end later than other high schools it seems. Aside from this info, love your story.

I want will to take on Alone in the Dark from Uwe Boll, one of the worst movies ever made. Could be an interesting arc where he will have to surpass himself. Regarding June, and sorry it will be a long text, I will be honest I was waiting until I saw what you were going for with her, but here is my take on why there is such a controversy with the character. It lies in two things: contrast and story. Aside from the Blair witch arc, most appearances from June were negative with her confidence's problems and it contrasted too much with Will the MC who was always positive, so this contrast gave a negative connotation to June. But the biggest problems lies in the story itself, June is a secondary character, she doesn't have enough presence in the story to have her own character arc so suddenly. Will as our reader POV had more interaction with Jeffery and Amanda than June, so it gives more the impression that June is a background character than someone who is a t front stage. The second problem lies in the fact that we already have an MC with his own studio, making his own movies, so why is June going for the same path, it leads back to the problem of contrast, she will be compared to Will since she is going for the same 'role' in the story. And you could make her have problems in making the studio, but then we're going back to the comparison with Will. And most readers are here to read about a character with a system going on his path to success. Hope it helps you, and still love your story and will continue reading it.

Since it's a fic that you use to better your writing, here's my opinion on why drama and conflict don't work in this fic : It's not the drama that bothers me, conflict makes a story after all, but your execution is lacking because you didn't build up your story correctly for this kind of drama or difficulty and because of that we go from 0 to 100 miles suddenly. I'm giving you an example of how your story isn't truly built for this. Let's go back to the arc where the system asked him to make his own original big movie. It was sudden, until now he was only doing movies that already existed where he had a template for it, then he must do a blockbuster by himself. A truly logical build-up toward this would have been multiple missions, like the system could have given him the scenario of a bad movie (or a uwe boll movie XD) and asked him to make it a good one (not in terms of views but of critics), or ask him to make a small successful original movie. But instead, it directly asked for a blockbuster. And he still cheated in some way since he used GTA stuff to make his movie. Add to that, that until now the problems have been kinda once and done and easily at that, and that's why this fic isn't truly a fic where you can put drama easily or correctly because you haven't built it for it.

Hmmm, I like the novel but there are two things that I find strange : 1) Why does he hide behind the Amon thing in Mondstat, he could have used the adventure's guild Catherine situation and said that he is the same. What I mean is that the hidden identity wasn't necessary. 2) He doesn't react to the fact that Hu Tao has gone inside his place when he explicitly forbid her from entering, and she still entered as if she owned the place. I don't mean that he should give her the mother of all tongue lashing, but I don't think that a person would react positively there. Aside from that, love the novel keep up the good work.

I will be a little harsh, but the fact that you are asking this is saying that you still have no true idea about the story you want to write. If you go with this kind of question for the basis of your story, there is a great chance that it may lead to a rewrite or you giving up on the story. I've seen that happening lots of times. So my opinion would be more decide for yourself, ask yourself what you want to write and which beginning you want to use. Being indecisive at the start will not be good for your story in the long term.

This is a story that is not one. The author is only rewriting Douluo Dalu and adding a few sentences like: "MC looks on with a smile on his face". The biggest tale that there is a problem with this is that you could replace the MC with an object and you would have the same things happening. The problem is that the author wants his character to be with Tang San and co and doesn't want to change the story but doesn't make it so that his character has a story. As an example, during the Shrek academy arc, the teachers teach nothing to the MC because he is OP and doesn't need help with cultivation, but they could have set up a regiment to make him gain true experience by sending him on some adventures. What I meant by all of that is that the author doesn't make a story parallel to canon so that his character can live in the douluo world, he is only witnessing and doing nothing. That's the negative of this story, and since I don't like being negative about things I will talk about the positives. In terms of story updates, the author is constant and the quality doesn't fall. The writing is good and it is easily readable and aside from the common mistakes, like quiet (volume down) that becomes quite (quantity), you will not find anything to complain about reading this.