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Honestly, this inconsistency in the Pokémon names is ruining the story. First, Marshtomp became Swampert, then Mudkip, and then Swampert again. Now Hattrem became Tinkatink and then Hatterene. Please proofread the chapters before releasing them; this is the only thing hindering the story.

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Innocent comments, he discovers the entire chemical composition of the serum with his ability and can recreate the serum infinitely?

Okay, I liked the story so far, but the timeline doesn't match, for example, how Voldemort kills the Blacks and then Regulus says he needs to go before Voldemort discovers his betrayal in running away with Albert? Another thing is, how Sirius was arrested before Voldemort died, when he is only arrested after chasing Peter after the Potters' death.

It's giving me agony watching these "titles" within the chapter, many times the title of the chapter already gives a small spoiler of what's going to happen, putting a bunch of titles in the middle ruins the fun, too many spoilers

It's giving me agony watching these "titles" within the chapter, many times the title of the chapter already gives a small spoiler of what's going to happen, putting a bunch of titles in the middle ruins the fun, too many spoilers

Was the author too lazy to go back to the first fifty chapters to fix the spacing? The book looks good, but it's not worth the headache of those unspaced chapters.

I thought MC was smart until now, not getting a clefairy or asking to accompany him is illogical, a rare pokemon and great for training with the gravity skill, in addition to healing, so yes MC is an idiot

I thought MC was smart until now, not getting a clefairy or asking to accompany him is illogical, a rare pokemon and great for training with the gravity skill, in addition to healing, so yes MC is an idiot

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