limitbreaker

author the order of the chapter are wrong

aurhor is making it so that every chapter the protagonist discovers something about himself or is re affirming himself about his goal, not the actual development of the character or more so of the plot.

who's that pokemon?

it is a great book with superb grammar and story building. you can make a collab with the book "gotham's dead end bar " and try to make an omake of it or keep it a part of the Canon.

primordial ruins from fgo

murim login

man this is pure gold keep writing please

it is a great novel . thanks for the chapter and keep them coming

I see no problems man, it is a very good novel and your concepts are also very creative and it's just a suggestion but you can also go the Percy Jackson universe as the mc is currently going up against hades and which better way to train up than beating up the original nemesis from a different reality

more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please ................................................................................